A. Facial tattooing among the different indigenous groups reflects the pride that people have for their tribe as well as the desire for identification between groups. B. Why some indigenous groups tattoo their faces. C. In this essay, I will explain why some indigenous groups tattoo their faces.
A.
Your spokesperson will write the revised thesis statement on your group's notecard: The problem of pollution in big cities.
Example: The problem of pollution in major cities can be alleviated by limiting the number of cars allowed to drive on city streets, increasing the minimum gas mileage on cars, and creating more efficient public transportation systems.
Your spokesperson will write the revised thesis statement on your group's notecard: Being a vegetarian is better.
Example: Being a vegetarian is preferable to eating meat for mental, spiritual, and physical reasons.
Your spokesperson will write the revised thesis statement on your group's notecard: My parents and I are very different.
Example: My parents and I are different in the way we socialize, dress and choose what to eat.
True or False: Your thesis statement states the main idea of the essay in one sentence.
True. Sometimes 2 sentences is acceptable, but are typically just 1.
Your spokesperson will write the revised thesis statement on your group's notecard: High school students should be required to take a foreign language class.
Example: High school students should be required to take a foreign language class because it exposes them to different cultures, it makes them more employable in many careers, and it helps strengthen their learning skills.
True or False: "Animal abuse is a terrible problem.", the above statement is a poor thesis statement.
True. This statement is only pointing out the obvious--most reasonable people agree that animal abuse is both terrible, and a problem.
A. There are many ways in which you can look for a new house. B. You can look for a new house by reading the classified ads, talking to a realtor, or talking with friends about houses in the area in which you want to live. C. Buying a new house is a difficult thing to do because it may be challenging to get started.
C.
A. & B. are both facts.
Nominate one from your group and write the revision on the board. Why should school weeks be 4 days long instead of 5 days long?
Example: School weeks should be 4 days long instead of 5 days long because it prevents academic burnout, it gives students more time at home with their families, and it allows for more time to work on schoolwork.