A: Even though homeownership is part of the American Dream, rising prices and high interest rates are making it harder for many people in the USA to buy houses.
B: I am going to explain why it is difficult for many people in the USA to buy houses today.
C: Buying houses in the USA
A. A thesis statement should not directly announce your topic by using phrases such as, "This essay will talk about…"
A. The daily life of the Aztecs reflected a deep connection to religion, social order, and agriculture, all of which shaped their culture and ensured the survival of their empire.
B. Why social structure, and agriculture were important parts of the Aztecs’ way of life.
C. In this essay, I will explain how religion, social structure, and farming played a role in the Aztecs’ daily life.
A.
Which of these is a thesis statement?
A. Knowing a foreign language.
B. Why should people know a foreign language?
C. Knowing a foreign language is a very useful skill because it can help one advance in a career, relate better to others, and open one's mind to the ideas of another culture.
C. A thesis statement is a complete sentence. A thesis statement is not a question.
A. "Christmas" is the most important holiday in my country. The most important events that make up this holiday include Santa visits, gifts, and family time.
B. An important holiday in my country is Christmas, which means Christ Mass. Many events are included in this holiday.
C. I am going to describe an important holiday in my country.
A
Which of these is a thesis statement?
A. Michaelangelo's artwork is powerful because of its technique and symbolism
B. Michaelangelo's artwork is famous and is admired by many.
C. Michaelangelo was a great artist in Rome during the 1500's.
A. A thesis statement states an attitude or opinion on a topic. It doesn't just state the topic, itself. A thesis should not be a fact.
A. I've lived in a small town my entire life and have enjoyed it.
B. Living in a big city has many headaches.
C. In contrast to living in a big city, I enjoy living in a smaller town, because I have closer relationships with my neighbors and the pace of life is much healthier.
C
Which of these makes the best thesis statement? A. The reasons why I came to the United States to study.
B. The reasons why I came to the United States to study were to educate myself and then to return to Tunisia to apply my education.
C. There were many reasons why I came to the United States to study.
B. A thesis statement can be made more specific by listing subtopics. These help give your reader a clear idea of what will follow in your essay.
Nominate one person from your group to write the revision on the board. College students should be required to take Spanish.
Example: Restate and name three reasons
A. The United States chose not to enter World War II until 1941, even though the conflict began in Europe in 1939.
B. We shouldn’t go to war anymore.
C. The U.S. should avoid entering future wars unless absolutely necessary, focusing instead on diplomacy and global cooperation to solve international conflicts.
C. A-a fact; B-too general; C-states one main idea with two subtopics.
A. There are many ways in which you can look for a new house.
B. You can look for a new house by reading the classified ads, talking to a realtor, or talking with friends about houses in the area in which you want to live.
C. Buying a new house is a difficult thing to do.
B.
Nominate one from your group and write the revision on the board. Why should kids be allowed to vote?
Example: Marijuana should be legalized because it is not any more addictive than tobacco, it can reduce drug crimes and it can provide numerous medicinal benefits for those suffering from terminal illnesses.