Change "I'm writing to tell you..." to formal.
I am writing to inform you... / I am writing with regard to...
Name one word to start your FIRST body paragraph.
Firstly / To start with / In the first place.
A person looking for a job is a "job...".
Jobseeker (or Candidate).
Should you use contractions like "I'm", "don't", "can't"?
No (use "I am", "do not", "cannot").
Correct this: "I writing to you because..."
I am writing to you...
Change "So you see, it’s easier..." to formal.
Consequently, it is more straightforward... / Thus, it is simplified...
Which word is formal for "But": However or And?
However.
What do we call a meeting where many companies look for employees?
A Job Fair.
Where do you state your opinion for the first time?
In the introduction (Paragraph 1).
Make it formal: "Job fairs are great."
Job fairs are extremely productive/beneficial.
Change "I think you're wrong" to a polite formal phrase.
I strongly disagree with... / I am of a different opinion.
Name two words to show a Result.
Consequently, Therefore, As a result, Thus.
What is the formal word for "no longer used" or "out of date"? (From the text).
Obsolete.
If you know the Editor's name is Mr. Smith, how do you sign off?
Yours sincerely.
Fix the passive voice: "The article was wrote by a journalist."
The article was written by a journalist.
Change "Can’t wait to see what others think" to formal.
I look forward to reading others' opinions on this issue.
Use a formal word to add one more point (instead of "also").
Furthermore / Moreover / In addition.
What is the document called where you write your experience and skills?
CV (Curriculum Vitae) or Resume.
How many main body paragraphs should a standard letter have?
2 to 3 (as per the Plan on p.71).
Fix the tone: "You should think about what I said."
I hope my comments will be taken into consideration.
Change "Thanks a million" (sign-off) if you started with "Dear Sir/Madam".
Yours faithfully.
What phrase do you use to start the final paragraph (Summary)?
To sum up / In conclusion / All things considered.
A synonym for "Recruiter" or "Boss" (starts with E).
Employer
What is the "Register" of a Letter to the Editor?
Formal Style (polite, impersonal tone).
Combine using "Consequently": "I have skills. I will get a job."
I possess the necessary skills; consequently, I will secure employment.