True or false
A thesis statement should include the main points that you will express in your essay
True
American food is better because it has a plan taste, it's the same food people love, Nothing changes about it.
Chinese food is better because they have amazing wonton soup, they have so many different flavors, and they eat a lot of noodles
American vs Chinese
A). yes
b). Jeopardy is fun
C). jeopardy is fun because people get to play with friends, people get to guess, and it's not a real test.
C
Water is really good because it's good.
water is amazing because it's refreshing, it's healthy, and it helps people with life.
a thesis statement can only be in your conclusion
Don't
A thesis statement is not detailed at all
false
glasses are better because they are stylish, they can change into sunglasses, and sometimes they are on sale
Contacts are better because they can change your eye color, people won't get made fun of, and it's like their invisible.
Contact vs glasses
A). backpacks are cool
b). Backpacks hold stuff
C) Backpacks are good for the following reasons: the hold books, they're like your personal luggage bags, and they are compatible
C
Halloween is the best
Halloween is the best because people get candy, people can dress up, and people can scare other people.
your thesis statement can be ONLY two sentences
DON"T
you should include your thesis in the last sentence of your intro and the first sentence of your conclusion
true
water is better because it keeps you hydrated, people can put their own flavoring, and people can buy and customize water bottles
Kool-aid is better because it's artificial, they have so many flavors, and they dye your tongue.
Water vs Kool-aid
a). Vans are the best snickers because they have the strip thingy, their expensive, and everyone complainments people.
b). vans are cool
c). yus vans
A
the beach is fun
the beach is fun because people get to do sand castles, they ocean is relaxing, and get family time.
you are allowed to say your opinion
don't
A thesis statement can be more than one sentence
False
Pens are better because they help people write smoother, they have different designs, and they are colorful
Wood pencils are better because people can erase their mistakes, They are yellow, and the eraser looks like a pink puppy nose.
Wood pencils vs Pens
a). McDonalds has the best fries because I like them
b). McDonalds had the best fries for the following reasons: they are salty, they are better when soggy, and they melt in peoples mouths
c). McDonalds had the best fries because i like Their big macs
B
Hamburgers are goooooooooooooooooood
Hamburgers are good because they have ketchup, they have pickles, and they have lettuce
You can use first person words
DON"T
You are supposted to include details in every paragraph.
True
Apple phones are better because they have long lasting battery, There camera's are crystal clear, and they have bigger screens.
Android phones are better because they are long lasting phones, they are the ULTIMATE big screen phone and they cost less then apple phones.
Apple phone vs Android phone
a). Blankets are comfortable because they are soft, keeps people warm and their feeling don't get hurt.
b). blankets are comfortable because I like them, I can favorite a blanket, and they keep ME warm.
c). Blankets are comfortable because I said so
A.
i like turtles because they are cool
Turtles are fascinating creatures because they love a long life, they lay eggs, and they are beautiful.
don't use first person words
DO