Unnecessary Adverbs and Adjectives
Ridiculous Redundancy
Self-conscious over-explaining
Unnecessary Phrases
Comma Splices and Semicolons
100

The cat is extremely fat.

What is extremely?

100

My water was full of frozen ice.

What is frozen?

100

In addition to cats, hippos can also be aggressive.

What is in addition to cats?

100

...considering the fact that octopuses have three hearts.

What is considering the fact that?

100

Give correct sentence: Cats are mean, they sometimes bite.

What is Cats are mean;/./because they sometimes bite.

200

The superhero heroically saved Mrs. Saxton from the cat.

What is heroically?

200

I am currently working on this project.

What is currently?

200

One of the more remarkable aspects of TK is the fact that Mrs. Saxton is a teacher here.

What is one of the most remarkable aspects of TK is the fact that?

200

He is a man who works very hard.

What is "is a man who"?

200

Give correct sentence: I love the Golden Girls, they are so funny.

What is I love the Golden Girls;/./because they are so funny.

300

Mr. Peterson menacingly stormed the halls.

What is menacingly?

300

My study guide was previously done before the test.

What is previously?

300

In addition to Mrs. Saxton, Mr. Dudik is a great teacher.

What is in addition to Mrs. Saxton?

300

Michigan is a place that gets snow.

What is "is a place that"?

300

Give correct sentence: Morel mushrooms are my favorite food, they taste so good.

What is Morel Mushrooms are my favorite food;/./because they taste so good?

400

My dear old dog bounded toward the car.

What is dear old?

400

The drug caffeine increases alertness.

What is the drug?

400

Michiganders have adopted a lifestyle that is leisurely.

What is have adopted?

400

Dancing is an activity that expresses emotion.

What is "is an activity that"?

400

Give correct sentence: My favorite artist is Bon Iver, he is a really good singer.

What is my favorite artist is Bon Iver;/./because he is a really good singer.

500

The green grass glistened in the bright sun.

What is green and bright?

500

There are exactly 7 cervical vertebrae in your body.

What is exactly?
500

Give correct sentence: From cats, to dogs, both make great pets.

What is From cats to dogs, both make great pets?

500

My favorite thing that I like to do is find money on the ground.

What is "that I like"?

500

Give correct sentence: David Foster Wallace is my favorite author, he is a literary maximalist.

What is David Foster Wallace is my favorite author;/./because he is a literary maximalist?

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