Tone/Mood
Tone or Mood: How the author feels about the topic they are writing about
Tone
What is imagery?
the use of sensory, vivid language in a text
What does it mean if a story is told from the first person?
The person telling the story is speaking from the "I," generally telling their own experience
Connotation or Denotation? The dictionary definition of the word
DENOTATION
What is a thesis in a narrative essay?
the message or moral
Tone or Mood: How the reader is made to feel as a result of what the author has written
Mood
What are the five sense that imagery can appeal to?
taste, touch, smell, sound, sight
What does it mean to tell a story "retrospectively"?
To look back on something that happened in your past
Connotation or Denotation? The emotional or social associations of a word
CONNOTATION
What is the thesis of "Fish Cheeks"?
Accepting your culture can help you accept yourself.
What is the tone of the following text:
“Of course, you can have the last piece of cake!” she said with a bright smile, her voice light and inviting. “It’s the least I can do after all you’ve done for me.”
Despite her warm words and cheerful demeanor, a flicker of bitterness simmered beneath the surface. Each word she spoke felt like an effort to mask the frustration she felt about having to give up something she had been looking forward to all week.
Tone: Friendly and accommodating
Which words in the following sentence are considered "imagery"?
The crimson leaves danced like flames in the crisp autumn wind, scattering a fiery carpet across the cobblestone path.
Why would someone generally want to tell a story about their past?
to remember, reflect, learn from their mistakes
Consider the word "persistent." Is the connotation of this word generally positive, negative, or neutral?
POSITIVE
What is the thesis of "Prom"?
Forgiving people is brave and is a part of forgiving yourself.
What is the mood of the following text?
“Of course, you can have the last piece of cake!” she said with a bright smile, her voice light and inviting. “It’s the least I can do after all you’ve done for me.”
Despite her warm words and cheerful demeanor, a flicker of bitterness simmered beneath the surface. Each word she spoke felt like an effort to mask the frustration she felt about having to give up something she had been looking forward to all week.
Mood: bitter, resentful, vengeful
What senses does the following sentence appeal to?
The rich aroma of freshly baked bread mingled with the comforting crackle of the oven, creating a warm, inviting symphony.
Smell and Sound
What is the author's point of view on climbing in the following sentence? How do you know?
To me, the thrill of climbing a mountain is unmatched by any other experience, as it’s not just about the view from the top, but the profound sense of accomplishment that comes from overcoming every obstacle along the way.
thrill, unmatched, profound, accomplishment, overcoming obstacles
point of view: thinks climbing is an incredible achievement
How does the word "stench" differ in connotation from the word "aroma"?
Aroma = positive; stench = negative
What is the thesis of "Underrated"?
Never give up!
What is the tone AND the mood of the following text?
"Welcome to the grand opening of our new store!" the manager announced with enthusiastic gestures and a beaming smile. "We’ve worked so hard to make this a special place for everyone!"
Despite the manager’s exuberant welcome, the atmosphere in the store felt strained. The staff exchanged worried glances, and the customers seemed uneasy, as if the excitement was masking deeper concerns about the store’s future and its ability to live up to the hype.
**Tone:** Excited and upbeat
**Mood:** Tense and uncomfortable
What sense(s) does the following sentence appeal to?
The velvet curtains shimmered in the golden light, their smooth texture inviting fingers to glide along the lush, dark fabric.
sight, touch
What is the author's point of view on traveling in the following sentence? How do you know?
Traveling alone is the ultimate way to gain self-discovery and freedom, as it forces you to confront your fears and embrace the unknown without the comfort of familiar faces.
ultimate, self-discovery, freedom, confront fears, embrace unknown
POV: travel is the BEST way to learn about yourself
What is the connotation of the phrase "brutalized backbone" in the text "The Dreamer"?
NEGATIVE
What is the thesis of "The Dreamer"?
Don't give up in the pursuit of your dreams.