Bryn wants to go over their.
THEIR SHOULD BE THERE
Eli is (a, an) fast person.
A
Eli has ( two, too, to) dogs.
Two
I think you guys should do your homework.
Formal
Children playing.
Misktake should be children are playing
Me and Jacob our staying at the hotel closest to the stadium.
OUR SHOULD BE ARE & JACOB AND I
Jacob has 3 (less, fewer) trees than Mrs. Boyer.
fewer
Layne is going over( there, their, they're ).
THERE
Y'all should rly pay attention more.
Informal
ARMAN WEARING A SHIRT.
SHOULD BE ARMAN IS WEARING A SHIRT
Eli B's bear neck burned in the direct sunlight.
BEAR SHOULD BE BARE
Sarah is (a,an) academically smart student.
An
Jacob dresses very( formally, formerly ).
FORMALLY
The balloon was blown up.
Informal, The balloon was inflated.
Jacob is going to have success in his future
NO MISTAKE
My back will brake if we put one more thing in this backpack.
THE BRAKE NEEDS TO BE BREAK
Bryn talks (as if, like) she has to do a 20-page essay by tomorrow.
As if
Tia (use to, or used to ) do gymnastics.
USED TO
They will be attending the meeting tomorrow.
Formal
If it was informal it would be They'll be attending the meeting tmr
The third planet from the sun the earth.
should be the third planet from the sun is the earth.
Is Eli faster then Jacob?
THEN NEEDS TO BE CHANGED TO THAN
Tia had a difficult time deciding (between, among) the two puppies playing together (inside, inside of) the large box.
between and inside of
He saw something and she saw it ( to, too, two).
TOO
The patient got over their sickness.
Informal
Formal would be, the patient recovered from their sickness.
Mrs. Boyer asked us to try and memorize all the 46 presidents of America for the quiz by Friday.
Incorrect, shouldn't be "the" 46 presidents