STM GEO
RACE RESPONSES
PEER EDITING
STM DRESS CODE
8th Grade
100

This imaginary line divides Earth into the Northern and Southern Hemispheres.

What is the Equator?

100

In the RACE writing strategy, this letter reminds you to turn the question into a statement.

What is R — Restate?

100

Which is better feedback?

A. “This is confusing.”
B. “Explain what you mean by this sentence.”

What is B?

100

Name one approved color for an STM polo shirt.

What is white, blue, or light blue?

100

Who is the oldest 8th grader?

GRANT

200

These imaginary lines measure how far north or south a location is from the Equator.

What are lines of latitude?

200

In a strong constructed response, this is your direct response or thesis statement. 

What is A — Answer?

200

Instead of simply saying “Add more,” a helpful editor should ask the writer to do this.

What is add an example showing a specific idea?

200

True or False: Students may wear any jacket or hoodie they want inside the classroom during colder weather.

What is False?

200

Who are the two best SHIPS of the 8th grade and what are their ship names

CHADDIE - ADDIE AND ANDY

KANDY - KIERA AND ANDY

300

 These imaginary lines measure how far east or west a location is from the Prime Meridian.

What are lines of longitude?

300

Giving an example, detail, or quotation from the text to support your answer is this part of RACE.

What is C — Cite evidence?

300

Your partner's introduction is boring. Which feedback would be more helpful?

A. “Your introduction is boring.”
B. “Start with a question, surprising fact, or specific detail.”

What is B?

300

Which type of footwear is NOT permitted?

A. Sneakers
B. Sandals and slides
C. Sperry shoes
D. School shoes

What is B — sandals and slides?

300

Which 8th grader mentioned 6-7 in their oratorical last year?

Nathaniel

400

A location's exact position on Earth, often written using latitude and longitude, is called this.

What is absolute location?

400

This part of RACE tells the reader why your evidence supports your answer.

What is E — Explain?

400

A writer makes a claim but does not provide evidence to support it. What type of feedback should a strong peer editor provide?

What is something like:

“Add evidence that directly supports your claim about _____.”

400

True or False: On a dress-down day, jeans with large rips and tears are acceptable.

What is False?

400

Which 8th grader got busted cheating last year and was put on a WANTED poster.

Peighton

500

Atlanta is located at approximately 33.7° N, 84.4° W. The two numbers together are called these.

What are coordinates?

500

The question asks: “Why was the character nervous about giving the speech?” Which is the best R in a RACE response?

A. The character was nervous.
B. The character was nervous about giving the speech because everyone was watching him.
C. The reason the character was nervous about giving the speech was because everyone was watching him.
D. I think he was nervous.

What is C?

500

Your partner gives you feedback that says “Good job.” Why is this not the strongest feedback, and what could they say instead?

What is:

It is too vague. A stronger response would identify something specific, such as:

“Your example about _____ makes your argument convincing because _____.”

500

A student arrives wearing:

  • An STM polo

  • Navy uniform pants

  • An STM-approved sweater

  • Bright neon hair dye

  • Proper school shoes

Which part of the dress code is the problem?

What is the hair color/grooming standard?

500

What is Mr. Madrano's dogs name?

Duke

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