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Elvie's Tone of Voice
100

Correction: Hi Amelia. Thank you for contacting Elvie Customer Care

Hi, Amelia. Thank you for contacting Elvie Customer Care.

100

Correction: Samantha smith is her name.

Samantha Smith is her name.

100

Thank you for contacting Elvie customer care.

Thank you for contacting Elvie Customer Care.

200

Correction: The weather this winter has been: windy wet, and unpredictable

'The weather this winter has been windy, wet, and unpredictable.

200

Correction: My birthday is on the 27th of january, which is Monday.

My birthday is on the 27th of January, which is Monday.

200

Do you see any orange light indicator as you plug your hub to charge?

Do you see any orange light indicator as you plug your Hub to charge?

300

Correction: Waiting for the storm to stop I was anxiously looking out the window

'Waiting for the storm to stop, I was anxiously looking out the window.

300

Correction: She lives in south Carolina.

She lives in South Carolina.

300

Thank you for bringing to our attention that your pump is not turning on anymore. We understand the importance of having a working pump in your journey.

Thank you for bringing to our attention that your Elvie Pump is not turning on anymore. We understand the importance of having a working pump in your journey.

400

Correction: My pin number has two 5's. It's easy to remember.

My pin number has two 5s. It's easy to remember.

- no aposthrophe

400

Correction: She said, “i love Elvie products.”

Correction: She said, “I love Elvie products.”

400

Thank you for letting us know that milk got in your Elvie Stride's Hub. To ensure your pump works properly, we would like to process a replacement for you Hub and tubes.

Thank you for letting us know that milk got in your Elvie Stride's Hub. To ensure your pump works properly, we would like to process a replacement for you Hub and Tubes.

500

Correction: My address is at 123, Elvie Street, Movate, N.Y., 12401.

My address is at 123, Elvie Street, Movate, NY, 12401.

500

Correction: The Renaissance was a period of great achievements. It followed the middle ages, and lasted from the 14th Century until 1600.

The Renaissance was a period of great achievements. It followed the Middle Ages, and lasted from the 14th century until 1600.

500

Kindly provide us your Proof of Purchase, Serial Number of the faulty hub, and your preferred delivery address.

Kindly provide us your proof of purchase, serial number of the faulty Hub, and your preferred delivery address.

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