Focus and Development
In "Being" the poet uses the words alive and still.
They don't explain why the poet used those words.
In "Being", the poet’s choice of words like “alive” and “still” conveys presence and mindfulness.
What is wrong?
In the poem "Generation to Generation" the rhythm shows tradition being passed down. The words “time” and “repeat” are important because they are examples of diction that connect to family. The poet also uses line breaks to show how culture moves forward.
Mismatch between topic sentence and support
In "Generation to Generation", the poet uses rhythm to show the passing of traditions. Line breaks emphasize the flow of culture over time, while repeated words highlight the continuity of family values. Overall, the paragraph connects rhythm, line breaks, and diction to the theme of cultural heritage.
Millay use metaphors to show how her mother courage still matter after she die
Millay uses metaphors to show how her mother’s courage still matters after she died.
In "Generation to Generation" the poem repeats words about time.
What is wrong with this sentence?
They don't explain why the poet used those words. They need to include a claim to direct their writing.
In "Generation to Generation", repeated words reflect the continuity of family traditions and cultural values.
What is wrong?
In the poem "My Father and Myself Facing the Sun" the father and son are standing in the light. The poet describes the sunlight shining on their faces. This shows how family legacy and connection are important to culture.
The sunlight imagery is explained before the importance of family so it feels disconnected.
In "My Father and Myself Facing the Sun", the poet first introduces the main idea about family connection. The imagery of sunlight shining on the father and child emphasizes warmth and bonding. This order makes the analysis clear and shows how the poet reflects cultural values through imagery.
The structure of "Mother to Son" is like cool and stuff because it don’t rhyme and its just written how she talks
The structure of Mother to Son reflects the speaker’s voice because it is written in free verse and does not rhyme.
In "Those Winter Sundays" the dad was cold in the mornings.
What is wrong with this sentence?
It needs to include a claim with the meaning.
In "Those Winter Sundays", the father wakes early on cold mornings to warm the house, showing his quiet sacrifice and love.
What is wrong?
In the poem "Being" the words “alive,” “present,” and “still” show how the speaker thinks about existence. The poet also uses other descriptive words to explain the theme.
The sentence starts specific and then becomes broader. It should start general then become specific with support.
In "Being", the poet uses diction such as “alive,” “present,” and “still” to express mindfulness. These word choices support the poem’s theme of appreciating existence. Each word is carefully chosen to reflect the poet’s focus on the experience of life.
In "Those Winter Sundays" the father’s sacrifices was symbolism of love for his son.
In "Those Winter Sundays", the father’s sacrifices symbolize love for his son.
In "On Children" kids are arrows.
What is wrong with this sentence?
It needs to explain why the kids are arrows. What type of literary device is it and what is the meaning?
In "On Children", Gibran compares children to arrows, emphasizing that parents guide them but cannot control their futures.
What is wrong?
In "Those Winter Sundays" the poet uses imagery of cold mornings. The tone is serious and kind of sad. Symbolism shows love too.
The writer keeps switching topics from imagery to tone to symbolism. They don't explain any connection
In "Those Winter Sundays", imagery of cold mornings shows the father’s sacrifices. The tone of the poem is reflective and somber, emphasizing love expressed through actions. Symbolism, such as the warming of hands, connects these actions to the broader theme of familial care.
The diction in "The Gift" is lit because it shows the vibe of respect between the boy and his father.
The diction in "The Gift" conveys respect and care between the boy and his father.
In "Mother to Son" the stairs are hard and the poem is free verse.
What is wrong with the sentence?
It doesn't give any meaning. It identifies that it is free verse but it doesn't explain the meaning.
In "Mother to Son", the speaker compares life to a staircase, using free verse to reflect the ongoing struggle and resilience.
In "My Father and Myself Facing the Sun" the poet talks about family connection. The sun shows how their bond is strong. One time I went fishing with my dad and I felt close to him too.
They switch topics suddenly and don't explain how the sun shows the strength of their bond.
In "My Father and Myself Facing the Sun", the poet highlights the bond between father and child. The sunlight symbolizes warmth and guidance, showing family connection. This idea is reinforced by personal experience, like fishing with a parent, which mirrors the poem’s theme of familial closeness.
In "On Children" Gibran use metaphor the kids are arrows, it also show rhythm, the parents is bows and they hold the arrows.
In "On Children", Gibran uses the metaphor of children as arrows to show that parents guide but do not control them, and the parents are like bows that support them.