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They run.

Who...........?

Where.........?

How............?

My sisters run home quickly. 

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On Saturdays, I like to run.

On Saturdays, I like to shop.

On Saturdays, I like to eat. 

On Saturdays, I like to run, shop, and eat. 

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rain/but

It is raining, but I will still go outside today.

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My sister is mean to me. 

My sister, Janet, is mean to me. 

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i like to eat apples bananas and pears

I like to eat apples, bananas, and pears. 

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Winton saved them.

Who...............?

What (whom) ..............?

How ....................?

Nicholas Winton saved many Jewish children by creating the Czech Kindertransport.

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A Kindertransport was created in Germany to save Jewish children.

A Kindertransport was created in Austria to save Jewish children.

A Kindertransport was created in Czechoslovakia to save Jewish children. 

Kindertransports were created in Germany, Austria, and Czechoslovakia to save Jewish children.

200

sun/beacuse

I am outside because the sun is out.

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Lebron James created a school. 

Lebron James, a basketball player and philanthropist, created a school. 

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we all attend the shefa school in new york new york.

We all attend The Shefa School in New York, New York.

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They (FR) were attacked.

Who ..................?

Where ...............? 

Why ..................?

The Freedom Riders were attacked when they arrived in Alabama because they believed in equal rights for all. 

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Nicholas Winton was born in 1909.

Nicholas Winton was born in England. 

Nicholas Winton was born into a wealthy family. 

In 1909, Nicholas Winton was born in England to a wealthy family. 

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although/homework

Although I have homework, I can still hang out with my friends. 

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Nicholas Winton is a kindhearted man.

Nicholas Winton, the creator of the Czech Kindertransport, is a kindhearted man.

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nicholas winton a kind man created the czech kindertransport in 1939

Nicholas Winton, a kind man, created the Czech Kindertransport in 1939.

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They are requiring recess.

Who ....................? 

Why ....................?

Schools in New Jersey are requiring recess because studies show it improves students' focus during class time. 

400

Sharks are misunderstood animals.

Sharks are smart animals. 

Sharks are not dangerous animals. 

Sharks are misunderstood and smart animals that are not dangerous. 
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after/Kindertransport

After Kristallnacht, the British created the German Kindertransport. 

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The Freedom Rides occurred in 1961.

The Freedom Rides, an interracial bus ride across state lines, occurred in 1961.

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why arent sharks dangerous animals.

Why arent sharks dangerous animals?

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According to them, they are actually harmless animals.

Who..............?

What.............?

According to scientists, sharks and are actually harmless animals. 

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Recess is fun.

Recess can be helpful.

Recess should be required. 

Recess is fun and helpful, so it should be required at all schools.

500

before/Freedom Riders

Before the Freedom Riders began their journey, buses were segregated all throughout the American South. 

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Kristallnacht occurred on November 9th and 10th, 1939.

Kristallnacht, an event in which Jewish shops and homes were destroyed by Nazis, occurred on November 9th and 10th, 1939.

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recess is now required In All new jersey schools.

Recess is now required in all New Jersey schools!

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