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Temple monkeys are golden brown weigh about 10 pounds, and are usually around 17 inches tall.
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Temple monkeys are golden brown, weigh about 10 pounds, and are usually around 17 inches tall.
Filmmakers and animal experts spent three years making the movie, which was called monkey kingdom.
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Filmmakers and animal experts spent three years making the movie, which was called Monkey Kingdom.
With their excellent color vision. They are able to find fruits and flowers in the tropical forest.
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With their excellent color vision, they are able to find fruits and flowers in the tropical forest.
Many people come to the temple ruins to see the monkeys and study his habits.
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Many people come to the temple ruins to see the monkeys and study their habits.
More then a million bats will come out from their home under the bridge and fill the sky.
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More then a million bats will come out from their home under the bridge and fill the sky.
At night, member's of a family gather in a warm, cozy huddle to sleep.
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At night, members of a family gather in a warm, cozy huddle to sleep.
No trip to the museum would be complete without a visit to the Texas spirit theater.
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No trip to the museum would be complete without a visit to the Texas Spirit Theater.
This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country it looks pink because it is made of sunset-red granite.
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This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country. It looks pink because it is made of sunset-red granite.
Like a true friend, it encouraged me.
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Like a true friend, he/she encouraged me.
Many familys take time off during the summer to travel.
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Many families take time off during the summer to travel.
It is fun to clap your hands in this room, and hear the echo that the ceiling produces.
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It is fun to clap your hands in this room and hear the echo that the ceiling produces.
By the end of the Summer, the tiny sprout had become the first new tree in a brand new forest.
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By the end of the summer, the tiny sprout had become the first new tree in a brand new forest.
She was also a birthday present. Meant to celebrate America's independence from Great Britain.
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She was also a birthday present meant to celebrate America's independence from Great Britain.
Mom, Chloe and Me all looked at one another.
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Mom, Chloe, and I all looked at one another.
Bright-red berrys began to grow on shrubs, and tiny wildflowers started to dot the landscape.
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Bright-red berrys began to grow on shrubs, and tiny wildflowers started to dot the landscape.
What could be a more perfect present?
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I was so bad that I figured coach wouldn't care if I got bored at practice and lay down in the outfield.
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I was so bad that I figured Coach wouldn't care if I got bored at practice and lay down in the outfield.
All the attention prompted Blair to create an organization. Called Blair's Bears for Haiti.
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All the attention prompted Blair to create an organization called Blair's Bears for Haiti.
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Today these ancient ruins serve as a home for a type of monkey called the toque macaque (pronounced toke ma-KAK).
"Make sure you don't leave any clumps," Dad instructed while I stired the mixture.
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"Make sure you don't leave any clumps," Dad instructed while I stired the mixture.
"What do I do first," I asked eagerly.
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"What do I do first?" I asked eagerly.
The world's narrowest house is in new zealand.
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The world's narrowest house is in New Zealand.
Otherwise the pancakes would stick to the surface, we would have a big mess to clean up.
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Otherwise the pancakes would stick to the surface, and we would have a big mess to clean up.
Others look for places more closer to home to explore.
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Others look for places closer to home to explore.
Some people might argue that a rock climbing wall is dangerous and that it would require to much adult supervision.
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Some people might argue that a rock climbing wall is dangerous and that it would require too much adult supervision.