Organization
True or false?
The number of main points should always be the same as the number of body paragraphs.
False
Identify the problem:
Ugyen’s grandmother complains about young people who party at night and then sleep in. (Lunana 1:01 – 1:06).
Ugyen’s grandmother complains about young people who party at night and then sleep in (Lunana 1:01 – 1:06).
What's missing?
Ugyen’s grandmother complains about young people who party at night and then sleep all day.
an in-text citation
What is the basic organization for the first body paragraph?
Topic sentence
Evidence
Analysis
Ugyen’s grandmother complains about young people. “Ah, kids these days. Roaming like horses all night, sleeping like pigs all day” (Lunana 1:01 – 1:06).
Ugyen’s grandmother complains, “Ah, kids these days. Roaming like horses all night, sleeping like pigs all day” (Lunana 1:01 – 1:06).
What's wrong with this first sentence of the introduction?
Since the beginning of time, people have tried to make their lives more comfortable.
Too general
From the second body paragraph, what organization should you use? (hint: four elements in order)
Transition + topic sentence
Evidence
Analysis
Identify the two title problems below:
"Lunana: a yak in the classroom" is set in Bhutan.
Lunana: A Yak in the Classroom
The song is meaningful to Ugyen. “But actually by saying this, he is praising the purity of one’s heart."
The song is meaningful to Ugyen after he hears Saldon's explanation: “But actually by saying this, he is praising the purity of one’s heart" (Lunana 1:13:16 – 1:14:00).
How should you organize your introduction? (hint: three elements in order)
- Somewhat general opening statement that indicates the topic
- Flow of ideas (bridge)
- Thesis statement
What should be done to correct the spacing below (two things)?
Work Cited
Lunana: A Yak in the Classroom. Directed by Pawo Choyning Dorji, performances by Sherab Dorji, Ugyen Norbu Lhendup, Kelden Lhamo Gurung, Kunzang Wangdi. Dangphu Dingphu: A 3 pigs Production, 2019.
- align the citation to the left
- indent all but the first line of the citation
What are at least three problems with the following thesis statement?
In this essay, I will explain Ugyen's experience and then I will talk about the problems with Bhutan's Gross National Happiness Index.
- does not take a position
- does not preview the ideas adequately
- lacks logical connection between the ideas