Remove the word because (subordinate conjunction) and I'm left with "The man peeled over with laughter. The man thought I was very funny"...and that is how I would separate this sentence.
AKA combine this sentence
What is The man peeled over with laughter because he thought I was very funny.
100
Follows the five point format, intro, three body, conclusion, and tells a story.
What is Narrative essay
100
Allison and Jonny walked to the store but they forgot the milk.
The comma goes where?
What is between store and but
100
Strategy using emotion to persuade someone
What is Pathos
200
he she it they them me us we her him I you are all examples of this
What is a pronoun
200
because I said so is an example of this
What is dependant or subordinating clause
200
Follows the five point format and attemps to give merit to an opinion
What is argumentative essay
200
Why am I worried
The punctuation at the end is...
What is a question mark
200
Strategy using Logics or evidence to prove or persuade someone.
What is Logos
300
and but so therefore however are all examples of this
What is conjunctions
300
I wanted to go over there but I couldn't so I didn't. is an example of this type of mistake.
What is a run on sentence
300
Follows the five point format and takes two or more things telling similarities and differences of each to prove a point
What is Comparitive essay
300
i havent been here for awhile now, but i plan on coming back to u soon.
This should be capitalized and the other isn't spelled right
What is I and You
300
Strategy using ethics to persuade someone.
What is Ethos
400
cross them out to find subject complements or direct objects, and something about what a squirrel does with a tree. They come in phrases.
What are prepositions
400
handy manny, dora the explorer, i, ashley county hospital, and the friday after next are all examples of words that should be this...
What is capitalized
400
Follows the five point format and explains or analyzes a particular topic
What is expository essay
400
I love reading she loves writing.
Something is missing in this sentence
What is a semicolon
400
This needs no answer; it's only meant to make one think about the topic asked and can be used as the opening sentence in an argumentative essay.
What is rhetorical question
500
the two types of verbs and examples of each
What are action (jump, run, touch, etc.) and linking (is was were am)
500
Jamie wore the green jacket, and the green jacket was Jamie's very favorite. This sentence shows this, and your question shows how to correct it.
Correct this sentence.
What is repitition. Jamie wore the green jacket; it was her favorite. or , and it was her favorite. or because it was her favorite
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I am remembering. I was a little girl once who loved to dance. I would go out into the fields and spin around and around, feeling the wind through my hair. I thougt I was a ballerinna. In my mind, I was a ballerinna. A ballerinna with a long white Tutu and beautiful roses in my hair...
is an introduction to this type of essay...
What is narrative essay
500
davy jones is an mythological character that waches over those that die at sea because calypso gave him that duty and she loves him
this sentence needs correcting...
What is
Davy Jones is a mythological character who watches over those who die at sea because Calypso gave him that duty, and she loves him.
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Anaphora, similie, oxymoron, rhetorical questions, assonance, polysyndeton, etc. are all examples of this.