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She wanted to rented a bycicle because was better.
She wanted to RENT a BICYCLE because IT was better.
Complete with the missing linker: She was late for work. __________ there were many people in the subway.
She was late for work. Besides/Also/Moreover, there were many people in the subway.
When she got to the station there was too many people.
When she got to the station, there WERE too many people.
Complete with the missing linker: __________ , she went to the subway station. __________ , she left it and bought a bike.
First, she went to the subway station. Then / After that, she left it and bought a bike.
She didn't waited the subway and she arrived at time.
She didn't WAIT FOR the subway and she arrived ON time.
Complete with the missing linkers: She saw many people waiting for the bus. __________ she felt sad __________ she started crying.
Complete with the missing linker: She saw many people waiting for the bus. Therefore, she felt sad and she started crying.
She remembered that next the subway was a bicycle.
She remembered that next TO the subway THERE was a bicycle.
Complete with the missing linker: Her boss didn't fire her, __________ she would never take the subway again __________ .
Her boss didn't fire her, but she would never take the subway again anyway.
When she arrived were more people than she expected.
When she arrived, THERE were more people than she HAD expected.
Complete with the missing linkers: She wanted to buy a bike. __________, when she saw the price, she realized it was too expensive, __________ she prefered not to buy it.
She wanted to buy a bike. However, when she saw the price, she realized it was too expensive, so she prefered not to buy it.