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Snakes lizards crocodiles and turtles are reptiles
Snakes, lizards, crocodiles, and turtles are reptiles.
the hawaiian islands are located in the pacific ocean.
The Hawaiian islands are located in the Pacific Ocean.
Saturn is a huge planet it is more than nine times larger than earth.
Saturn is a huge planet. It is more than nine times larger than earth.
As the whole family loaded into the car.
KAREN SNEEZED as the whole family loaded into the car.
Or something like that.
Hunters please use caution when hunting hikers on the trail.
Hunters, please use caution when hunting. Hikers on the trail.
Some turtles live on land others live in lakes streams or oceans
Some turtles live on land, others live in lakes, streams, or oceans.
Hawaii officially became the fifty-first state in the united states in 1959.
Hawaii officially became the fifty-first state in the United States in 1959.
Saturn is covered by clouds, it is circled by bands of color.
Saturn is covered by clouds. It is circled by bands of color.
When we arrived at the airport.
When we arrived at the airport SOMETHING HAPPENED.
Or something like that.
No loitering tables are for eating customers.
No loitering. Tables are for customers only. (Or something like that- This sentence is just silly anyway).
Because some species of tortoises are endangered they cannot be sold as pets
Because some species of tortoises are endangered, they cannot be sold as pets.
iolani palace, a national historic landmark, is the only official state residence of royalty in the united states.
Iolani Palace, a national historic landmark, is the only official state residence of royalty in the United States.
Many of Saturn's moons have large craters the crater on Mimas covers one third of its diameter.
Many of Saturn's moons have large craters. The crater on Mimas covers one third of its diameter.
My sister and I down to the river.
My sister and I WENT/RAN/ROLLED/WERE DRAGGED/SOME VERB down to the river.
Restroom only for disabled elderly pregnant children.
Restroom only for PEOPLE with disablities, the elderly, people who are pregnant, or children.
There's a lot to discuss here, but they surely didn't mean elderly pregnant children...
Living in fresh water soft-shelled turtles have long flexible beaks
Living in fresh water, soft-shelled turtles have long, flexible beaks.
In 1893, opposition forces overthrew the hawaiian Monarchy and iolani palace was used as the capital building until 1968.
In 1893, opposition forces overthrew the Hawaiian monarchy and Iolani Palace was used as the capital building until 1968.
Mocking birds are great mimics they can imitate the songs of at least twenty other bird species.
Mocking birds are great mimics. They can imitate the songs of at least twenty other bird species.
The bird nest in the top of the oak tree.
The bird nest IS in the top of the oak tree.
or
There is a bird nest in the top of the oak tree.
or something like that.
I enjoy cooking my family and friends.
I enjoy cooking, my family, and friends.
Most turtles can pull their heads legs and tail into their shell however sea turtles cannot do so
Most turtles can pull their heads, legs, and tail into their shell, however sea turtles cannot do so.
from 1882 to 1893, Downtown honolulu's iolani palace was the official residence of the hawaiian kingdom's last two monarchs: king kalakaua and his sister and successor, queen liliuokalani.
From 1882 to 1893, downtown Honolulu's Iolani Palace was the official residence of the Hawaiian Kingdom's last two monarchs: King Kalakaua and his sister and successor, Queen Liliuokalani.
People say that life is short, there are some redwood trees more than 1500 years old.
People say that life is short, but there are some redwood trees more than 1500 years old.
My friend Larry, who has a good voice and a place in the chorus.
My friend Larry, who has a good voice and a place in the chorus, is singing now.
I'd like to thank my parents, Tiffany and God.
I'd like to thank my parents, Tiffany, and God.