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This is because they do many benefits from interactive learning styles such as teamwork and critical thinking. (one wrong word)
This is because they gain many benefits from interactive learning styles such as teamwork and critical thinking.
It is generally believed by some that interactive learning styles are not suitable for online class learning. (double hedging)
It is believed by some that interactive learning styles are not suitable for online class learning.
It is generally believed that interactive learning styles are not suitable for online class learning.
As one of the learning styles is interactive learning which involves many learning methods, such as team-based learning and problem-based learning. (remove 2 things)
One of the learning styles is interactive learning which involves many learning methods such as team-based learning and problem-based learning.
However, students could improve problem-solving efficiency in one type of interactive learning style, which is team-based learning. (1 missing word)
However, students could improve their problem-solving efficiency in one type of interactive learning style, which is team-based learning.
How many states are there in Australia?
6 (NSW, QLD, VIC, TAS, SA, WA) + 2 territories (ACT, NT)
Furthermore, another reason why interactive learning styles are suitable for learners is that they can promote cooperative work. (extra linker)
Another reason why interactive learning styles are suitable for learners is that they can promote cooperative work.
This is because interactive learning styles have two benefits, which are getting a range of opinions and solving comprehensive problems. (informal language)
This is because interactive learning styles have two benefits, which are eliciting/ producing/generating/a range of opinions and solving comprehensive problems.
Although some learners prefer to learn alone, this essay will argue that interactive learning style is more suitable for learners. (number)
Although some learners prefer to learn alone, this essay will argue that interactive learning styles are more suitable for learners.
It is recommended that students should combine traditional learning styles and interactive learning styles to enhance their study and abilities. (extra word in recommendation)
It is recommended that students combine traditional learning styles and interactive learning styles to enhance their study and abilities.
Who is the current prime minister of Australia?
Scott Morrison
This is because many students have a limit way of thinking, and they may learn from others what they do not knowledge. (2)
This is because many students have a limited way of thinking, and they may learn from others what they do not know.
In addition, students will encounter students who are unwilling to cooperate in interactive learning, which also leads to wasting of their time. (need hedging, too definite)
In addition, students are likely to encounter students who are unwilling to cooperate in interactive learning, which may lead to wasting their time.
Everyone has their own way of learning, especially interactive learning style are becoming more common. (need better linker between sentences and number)
Everyone has their own way of learning; however, interactive learning styles are becoming more common.
For example, for students whose major is accounting, they are very suitable for problem-based learning. (remove two words)
For example, students whose major is accounting, are very suitable for problem-based learning.
Who is the head of Australia?
The Queen Elizabeth II
In order to successfully in the study, learners need to participate in both interactive learning styles and other teaching styles depend on the study situations. (2)
In order to succeed in their study, learners need to participate in both interactive learning styles and other teaching styles depending on the study situations.
Many students may need to discuss ideas with each other in their group when using interactive learning methods such as team-based learning. (double hedging)
Many students need to discuss ideas with each other in their group when using interactive learning methods such as team-based learning.
As, the development of knowledge, there are many types of study styles that providing for learners including interactive learning styles. (2 errors, replace one word and change voice = active/passive)
With the development of knowledge, there are many types of study styles that are provided for learners including interactive learning styles.
For the improvement of today technology, there are a numerous number of students who prefer to study from home. (replace for and remove extra word)
Due to today's improvement of technology, there are a number of students who prefer to study from home.
What is didgeridoo used for ?
Making music
In a group, learner may encounter various ideas over the same topic, so they have to considering and evaluating those opinions that can help them to make the final decision. (change 4 words)
In a group, learners may encounter various ideas on the same topic so they have to consider and evaluate these opinions that can help them to make the final decision.
In conclusion, negative effects of interactive learning styles are the main reason why these styles are not suitable for learners. However, interactive learning styles are suitable for learners in this society because learners can learn more skills and acquire diverse ideas. (contradicting ideas)
In conclusion, negative effects of interactive learning styles are the main reason why these styles might not be suitable for (all )learners. However, this essay has argued that interactive learning styles are suitable for learners in contemporary society because learners can learn more skills and acquire diverse ideas.
In conclusion, negative effect on interactive learning styles are the main reason that why this style are not suitable for learners. (5 errors)
In conclusion, negative effects of interactive learning styles are the main reason why these styles are not suitable for learners.
This means that motivation to think of many students will decrease when they are interactive learning. (word order, word form)
This means that students' motivation to think will decrease when they are learning interactively.
This means that many students will not be motivated to think independently when participating in interactive learning.
What's the population of Australia?
25 million