Classic Series
Sounds Awkward
Compounds
Introductory Words & Noun of direct Address
Appositives
100

You can take a camera to the beach to a party or on a trip.

You can take a camera to the beach, to a party, or on trip.

100

Leon uses an expensive and Japanese camera.

Leon uses an expensive Japanese camera.

100

I wanted to go to the park but it started raining.

I wanted to go to the park, but it started raining.

100

After a few clicks you will hear a voice.

After a few clicks, you will hear a voice.

100

My brother a talented musician plays the guitar.

My brother, a talented musician, plays the guitar.

200

Senators presidents and famous people came to his studio.

Senators, presidents, and famous people came to his studio.

200
Cheap cameras can take lifelike clear pictures.

Cheap cameras can take clear, lifelike pictures.

200

We can either watch a movie or we can play a board game.

We can either watch a movie, or we can play a board game.

200

Fred do you ever make long-distance calls?

Fred, do you ever make long-distance calls?

200

The cat a fluffy Persian slept on the windowsill.

The cat, a fluffy Persian, slept on the windowsill.

300

Mathew Brady was talented ambitious and industrious.

Mathew Brady was talented, ambitious, and industrious.

300

Photographers became a popular common feature of American life.

Photographers became a common, popular feature of American life.

300

The dog barked loudly so the cat ran away.

The dog barked loudly, so the cat ran away.

300

A computer Dennis can be programmed.

A computer, Dennis, can be programmed. 

300

Sarah the captain of the soccer team scored the winning goal.

Sarah, the captain of the soccer team, scored the winning goal.

400

The new plates were dry clean and effective.

The new plates were dry, clean, and effective.

400

His clear dramatic photographs have become pieces of history.

His dramatic, clear photographs have become pieces of history.  

400

She loves to paint in her free time but she also plays the piano when she feels inspired.

She loves to paint in her free time, but she also plays the piano when she feels inspired.

400

A home computer for example can help you budget your money.

A home computer, for example, can help you budget your money.

400

My favorite book a thrilling mystery novel kept me up all night.

My favorite book, a thrilling mystery novel, kept me up all night.

500

Professional photographers previously had made their own plates and developed them.

Correct

500

Mathew Brady was a famous successful photographer.

Mathew Brady was a famous, successful photographer. 

500

Because it was his birthday we threw him a surprise party and everyone had a great time.

Because it was his birthday, we threw him a surprise party, and everyone had a great time.

500

You can use another program a word-processing program to write your history essay. 

You can use another program, a word-processing program, to write your history essay.

500

Mount Everest the highest mountain in the world attracts many climbers.

Mount Everest, the highest mountain in the world, attracts many climbers.