Redundancy: Identify the redundancy.
Wordiness: Rewrite to reduce the number of words without changing the meaning.
Synonyms: Remove the extra synonym in the sentence.
Passive Voice: Rewrite into active voice.
100

She opened the closed envelope.

She opened the closed envelope.

100

World War I started due to the fact that Franz Ferdinand died.

World War I started because Franz Ferdinand died.

100

My sister’s small miniature dachshunds bark every time they see me.

My sister’s miniature dachshunds bark every time they see me.

100

The poem was written by her.

She wrote the poem.

200

Nicolas Cage’s letter contained a secret document inside.

Nicolas Cage’s letter contained a secret document inside.

200

The art students need to learn the color wheel for the purpose of developing their color choices.

The art students need to learn the color wheel to develop their color choices.

200

In the past history, Chicago has been a sanctuary city for all immigrants.

In the past, Chicago has been a sanctuary city for all immigrants.

200

Each meal is prepared with loving care by the award-winning chef.

The award-winning chef prepared each meal.

300

Each and every person has the right to speak their mind but not to do whatever they want.

Each and every person has the right to speak their mind but not to do whatever they want.

300

Puerto Rico must become a state in order to declare bankruptcy.

Puerto Rico must become a state to declare bankruptcy.

300

Dorian’s end result for his experiment matched his hypothesis.

Dorian’s result for his experiment matched his hypothesis.

300

There is a test called the ACT which is administered to all students.

The ACT is administered to all students.

400

Our old teacher, Ms. Vega, visited us and came to welcome us to college. 

Our old teacher, Ms. Vega, visited us and came to welcome us to college.

400

The captain of the ship, who was the person on the ship in charge of navigating and assigning responsibilities, was an expert from Ireland.

The captain of the ship was an expert from Ireland.

400

He discovered it was written in the exact same handwriting as the mysterious note he’d received before.

He discovered it was written in the same handwriting as the mysterious note he’d received before.

400

The reason she knew about survival skills was because she researched about the zombie apocalypse.

She researched about the zombie apocalypse.

500

After analyzing it with close scrutiny, Camila realized the reality show was scripted.

After analyzing it with close scrutiny, Camila realized the reality show was scripted. 

500

He made the statement that he agreed with the concept that inflation was accelerated because of Covid-19.

He agreed with the concept that inflation was accelerated because of Covid-19.

500

There was an unexpected surprise: Iris, my best friend’s sister, ended up helping me for four hours.

There was a surprise: Iris, my best friend’s sister, ended up helping me for four hours.

500

It can be assumed that the play, Romeo and Juliet, might have become the inspiration for The Lion King 2: Simba’s Pride.

The play Romeo and Juliet might have become the inspiration for The Lion King 2: Simba’s Pride.