Grammar
L'accident industriel au Bangladesh est choquant.
( choking / shocked/ shocking)
shocking
It is not acceptable of not react.
It is not acceptable not to react
It is slavagism.
slavery
the gouvernement should punish the factories
government
There conditions of work are appalling.
Their
I think it is not human worked in bad conditions.
to work
tant que
as long as
I'm agree with that
I agree
We must change this conditions.
these conditions
It is important to make understand at factories to change.
It is important to make factories understand they have to change.
Companies should be obligated to respect the laws.
should be obliged to
They're/ there/ their controls should be stricter.
their
It show a badly conditions of work
( 3 errors)
shows / the / bad
We should sign a petition for make react people.
to make people react
It is a bad tendency.
trend
It is really shocking/ shocked to see this/ these child work on a machine.
shocking/ this
Workers should have best conditions.
better
On sait à quel point les usines de fast fashion sont dures avec les employés.
We know how hard the fast fashion companies are with the employees.
People must be sensibilised.
We must raise people's awareness about/ make people aware of
It is not acceptable of not react.
not to react