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My friend who sit next to me like reading mystery books.
My friend who sits next to me likes reading mystery books.
The class was quiet. The class was calm.
The class was quiet and calm.
mis mira gave us a new assignmant today
Miss Mora gave us a new assignment today.
The book is on the desk. It belongs to me.
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The book that is on the desk belongs to me.
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We did our work.
We completed our work carefully and on time.
The class read a story. The story was about animals.
The class read a story about animals.
The students were working on there projects, which was due tomorrow and needed to be finished.
The students were working on their projects, which were due tomorrow and needed to be finished.
The students read a passage. The passage was difficult. They understood it.
The students read a difficult passage, but they understood it.
Running quickly to catch the bus, the backpack fell off the students shoulder.
As the student was running quickly to catch the bus, the backpack fell off the student’s shoulder.
The teacher explained the lesson. The lesson was important. The students listened carefully.
The teacher explained the important lesson, and the students listened carefully.