run-on or run off?
Fragment Time
Parallelism
Punk-tutation
100

Jill is an actress she often appears in major network television shows.

Run-on

100

My car is difficult to start in the winter. Because of the cold weather.

Fragment

My car is difficult to start in the winter. Because of the cold weather.

100

Amy enjoyed running and to ride horses.

Amy enjoyed running and to ride horses. 

100

Sam told the genie "cheese pizza is my favorite."

COMMA

Sam told the genie, "Cheese pizza is my favorite."

150

My nephew loves to play football. You can find him on the practice field almost every day.

CORRECT

150

Michigan State University offers a variety of courses. Such as Psychology, Biology, Physics, and Music.

FRAGMENT

Michigan State University offers a variety of courses. Such as Psychology, Biology, Physics, and Music.

150

Our field trip included a visit to the art museum, talking to a local artist, and a workshop on oil-painting techniques.

Our field trip included a visit the art museum, a talk to a local artist, and attend a workshop on oil-painting techniques.

150

Before she joins the chess team Morgan Kelley wants me to help her practice.

COMMA

Before she joins the chess team, Morgan Kelley wants me to help her practice.

200
My grandmother loved to bake her apple pies were delicious

Run-on

200

She was a cheerleader in high school. Very talented, too.

FRAGMENT!

She was a cheerleader in high school. Very talented, too.

200

She was happy to see the summer end. Amelia swam with the dolphins, ran the Flying Pig Marathon, watch all of the Disney princess movies, and spending time with Grandma in Florida. It is great!

She was happy to see the summer end. Amelia swam with the dolphins, ran the Flying Pig Marathon, watched all of the Disney princess movies, and spent time with Grandma in Florida. It was great!

200

That summer, Rafiki became the co owner of a very successful lemonade stand.

HYPHEN

That summer, Rafiki became the co-owner of a very successful lemonade stand.

250

Yesterday my mother prepared my favorite dinner, she even baked a cake.

Run-on (COMMA SPICE)

250

When Dustin pulled into the driveway, Alicia admired his flashy new car. A red convertible with fancy rims and fuzzy dice hanging from the rearview mirror.

FRAGMENT

When Dustin pulled into the driveway, Alicia admired his flashy new car. A red convertible with fancy rims and fuzzy dice hanging from the rearview mirror. 

250

Gilderoy Lockhart needs to water, trim, and harvests the vegetables in the garden every day.

Gilderoy Lockhart needs to water, trim, and harvests the vegetables in the garden every day.

250

Mufasa's alarm clock didn't go off this morning he woke up bright and early nevertheless and still make it to school on time

THAMOs/THANOs 

Mufasa's alarm clock didn't go off this morning. He woke up bright and early; nevertheless, and still made it to school on time.

300

History is my favorite subject in school, I always get the highest grade.

Run-on (COMMA SPLICE)

300

I'm not scared of that ghost. I'm not.

Fragment

I'm not scared of that ghost. I'm not.

300

Haymitch Abernathy's infant cousin has three talents: eating, to sleep, and she cries a lot.

Haymitch Abernathy's infant cousin has three talents: eating, sleeping, and crying a lot.

300

Hermione Granger knew she could win the spelling bee if, she memorized all of the words in the official booklet

SWABI

Hermione Granger knew she could win the spelling bee if she memorized all of the words in the official booklet.