Arresting at 1 pm on a Saturday, Gigi was in the local jail for nine days.
Incorrect. Arrested (passive tense)
I love eating when I am feeling hungry.
I love eating when feeling hungry.
Although understanding algebra, the math test was very difficult for Harold and his brother Pete.
Incorrect. Wrong subject.
Before you choose a college, you should always consider that Patito is the cheapest option for NH residents.
Before choosing a college, you should always consider that Patito is the cheapest option for NH residents.
Wearing a big down coat, scarf, mittens and wool hat, the old man perspired heavily on the cross-town bus.
What is: correct
As Maria got used to living in the USA, she gradually became less homesick.
Getting used to living in the USA, Maria gradually became less homesick.
After Maria moving to Cali, Maria was dancing salsa almost every day.
Incorrect. Extra Subject
Since my family has a long history of cancer, they get screened every year.
Having a long history of cancer, my family gets screened every year.
Experiencing severe pain in her right leg, Jill wanted to run in the marathon on Sunday.
Incorrect. Not an adverb clause -- an adjective clause
Since it appeared in 1969, Peter and the Wolf, a kid's musical, has won nine Grammy awards.
Since appearing in 1969, Peter and the Wolf, a kid's musical, has won nine Grammy awards.