Name That Annoyance

Fix the Sentence
Grammar & Style
Citation Navigation
Audience Awareness
100

Dropping a quote into a paragraph with no context or introduction.

What is Armadillo Roadkill?

100

“Zombies are dangerous. ‘They do not need food or sleep’ (Brooks 42).”

What is: Introduce the quote and explain its relevance before or after?

100

Quote integration should match the _______ of the surrounding sentence.

What is grammar or syntax?

100

If a quote uses a title in the in-text citation, it should match what in the Works Cited?

What is: The first word of the entry?

100

What do Stedman’s driving analogies suggest about writing?

What is: Readers expect familiar conventions and get frustrated when they’re broken?

200

Using several quotes in a row without explanation or analysis.

What is Uncle Barry and His Encyclopedia of Useless Information?

200

“He said that ‘Have you ever felt afraid of the dark?’ (Smith 8).”

What is: Reword the lead-in to match the grammar of the quote?

200

Square brackets are used to show what?

What is: That the writer modified a quote?

200

What’s the issue with citing “The Zombie Survival Guide” in-text?

What is: The correct citation should be (Brooks)?

200

What does Stedman say about “rules” vs. “conventions”?

What is: Conventions are flexible and based on audience/rhetorical situation?

300

Starting or ending a paragraph with a quote, then moving on.

What is Dating Spider-Man?

300

“Nap smart. ‘Always rest your head on the desk’ (Piven 101).”

What is: Avoid starting a paragraph with a quote—context first?

300

No character was allowed to ‘escape their hypocrisy’ (Muller).” — What’s wrong here?

What is: Pronoun mismatch — it should be “his”?

300

Why might (25) be an acceptable citation?

What is: If the author is clearly introduced before the quote?

300

Why might a newspaper editor rank “Uncle Barry” differently than a college professor?

What is: Different disciplines value different citation habits?

400

In-text citation does not match the first word of the Works Cited entry.

What is I Can’t Find the Stupid Link?

400

“Physics changed in the 1970s (Hawking 51).”

What is: Clarify what part of the idea comes from Hawking?

400

Why is quoting too much without analysis a problem?

What is: It weakens your authority as the writer?

400

No author? How do you cite it in-text?

What is: Use the title in quotation marks?

400

What’s one genre where breaking quotation norms might be okay?

What is: A blog or creative nonfiction?

500

A quote is inserted mid-sentence but the grammar doesn't match.

What is Am I in the Right Movie?

500

“According to The Zombie Survival Guide, ‘Go for the head’ (135).”

What is: Cite using the author's name, not the title—(Brooks 135)?

500

The best way to check if a quote fits grammatically?

What is: Read your sentence out loud?

500

How does poor citation affect credibility?

What is: It confuses the reader and makes the writer seem careless?

500

Why should writers “use their turn signals” in writing?

What is: To signal to readers what to expect and how to interpret information?