Topic Sentence
Find the Topic Sentence in the body paragraph.
The driving age should not be raised from age sixteen to eighteen because teenagers get jobs and need transportation. For example, my friend Steve is sixteen and just got a job at Scoops Ahoy. Steve is typically scheduled for work right after school, and he drives himself to work from school since both of his parents work until later in the evening. Since Steve has his license, he is able to get to work on time and show that he is responsible. In fact, a recent study has shown that nearly 70% of teenagers get jobs when they turn sixteen. Many teenagers get jobs to pay for school events, go out with friends, or even help their families. If the driving age was raised to eighteen, Steve and other teenagers would not be able to have their jobs and earn money for themselves because it would be hard for them to get to work.
The driving age should not be raised from age sixteen to eighteen because teenagers get jobs and need transportation.
Which one is NOT a transitional word?
A. For example
B. Therefore
C. I think
D. B and C
C. I think
Where is the concluding sentence located in the body paragraph?
At the end of the paragraph, right after the details and examples?
Where is the topic sentence usually located in the body paragraph?
The beginning of each body paragraph.
Where are the details and examples usually located?
After the topic sentence.
Which sentence is the concluding sentence?
The driving age should not be raised from age sixteen to eighteen because teenagers get jobs and need transportation. For example, my friend Steve is sixteen and just got a job at Scoops Ahoy. Steve is typically scheduled for work right after school, and he drives himself to work from school since both of his parents work until later in the evening. Since Steve has his license, he is able to get to work on time and show that he is responsible. In fact, a recent study has shown that nearly 70% of teenagers get jobs when they turn sixteen. Many teenagers get jobs to pay for school events, go out with friends, or even help their families. If the driving age was raised to eighteen, Steve and other teenagers would not be able to have their jobs and earn money for themselves because it would be hard for them to get to work.
If the driving age was raised to eighteen, Steve and other teenagers would not be able to have their jobs and earn money for themselves because it would be hard for them to get to work.
Topic sentences are very similar to the ______ ________, except each topic sentence only contains one ________.
Thesis statement, Topic
Where are the examples and details in this paragraph?
The driving age should not be raised from age sixteen to eighteen because teenagers get jobs and need transportation. For example, my friend Steve is sixteen and just got a job at Scoops Ahoy. Steve is typically scheduled for work right after school, and he drives himself to work from school since both of his parents work until later in the evening. Since Steve has his license, he is able to get to work on time and show that he is responsible. In fact, a recent study has shown that nearly 70% of teenagers get jobs when they turn sixteen. Many teenagers get jobs to pay for school events, go out with friends, or even help their families. If the driving age was raised to eighteen, Steve and other teenagers would not be able to have their jobs and earn money for themselves because it would be hard for them to get to work.
For example, my friend Steve is sixteen and just got a job at Scoops Ahoy. Steve is typically scheduled for work right after school, and he drives himself to work from school since both of his parents work until later in the evening. Since Steve has his license, he is able to get to work on time and show that he is responsible. In fact, a recent study has shown that nearly 70% of teenagers get jobs when they turn sixteen. Many teenagers get jobs to pay for school events, go out with friends, or even help their families.
Why is a restated thesis needed in a concluding sentence?
To remind the reader of the 2-3 points of the essay.
Which one is a proper Topic Sentence?
A. Teachers should use computers in the classroom because they keep students interested, and students remember things better when they learn them on the computer.
B. All teachers should use computers in their classrooms to help students enjoy learning!
C. People should adopt dogs because they help you live longer.
C. People should adopt dogs because they help you live longer.
___________ is when you include more details in each of your examples so that you can fully explain your point.
Elaboration.
A concluding sentence has a _________, __________, and a _____________.
Restated Thesis, Counterargument, Mic Drop/Call to action
What is the Topic Sentence Formula?
CLAIM(+ should) + "because" + 1 reason(from thesis)
What does #MAPPS stand for?
#- Numbers, facts, or statistics
M- Me (personal stories or examples)
A- Adults I know (stories/examples about adults I know)
P- Peers (stories/examples about friends or made-up stories)
P- Professionals (examples from jobs I know)
S- Stars (celebrities, historical figures, or literary characters
What's the purpose of a concluding sentence?
It restates the topic sentence and “wraps up” the paragraph by connecting all the ideas from the paragraph together.