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athens a city in greece named after athena

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Athens is a city in Greece named after Athena.

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on february 11 1847 a baby boy was born in Milan ohio.

On February 11, 1847, a baby boy was born in Milan, Ohio.

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My dog goes to my husband son daughter-in-law  and nephew.

My dog goes to my husband, son, daughter-in-law, and nephew.

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 Cannibals don't eat clowns they taste funny.

Cannibals don't eat clowns. They taste funny.

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in greek myths centaurs are halfman and halfhorse

In Greek myths, centaurs are half-man and half-horse.

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Samuel and nancy Edison nameed they’re son Thomas.

Samuel and Nancy Edison named their son Thomas.

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if you are not sure about this let me know now

If you are not sure about this, let me know now.

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its impossible to sneeze and keep your eyes open

It's impossible to sneeze and keep your eyes open.

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One of Thomas teachers were reverend G B Engle

One of Thomas’s teachers was reverend G. B. Engle.


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Between your house on Main Street and my house on Grand Avenue the mayor's mansion stands proudly.

Between your house on Main Street and my house on Grand Avenue, the mayor's mansion stands proudly.

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I always pass on good advice it is the only thing to do with it  is never of any use to oneself

I always pass on good advice. It is the only thing one can do with it, and it is never of any use to oneself.


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in japan its considered good luck to cross the path of an black cat

In Japan, it is considered good luck to cross the path of a black cat. 

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At age fifteen saved the life of mr. J. U. Mackenzie’s son soon Edison used Mr Mackenzie’s telegraph key

At age fifteen, Edison saved the life of Mr. J. U. Mackenzie’s son, and soon, Edison used Mr. Mackenzie’s telegraph key.

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We had coffee cheese and crackers and grapes.

We had coffee, cheese and crackers, and grapes.

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At age fifteen saved the life of mr. J. U. Mackenzie’s son soon Edison useing Mr Mackenzie’s telegraph key

At age fifteen saved the life of Mr. J. U. Mackenzie’s son and, soon, Edison, using Mr Mackenzie’s telegraph key.

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a sneeze are you’re bodies weigh of geting rid of irritants

A sneeze is your body's way of getting rid of irritants.

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Thomas asked many questions and his teacher often accused he of not behaving

Thomas asked many questions, and his teacher often accused him of not behaving.

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One year edison worked in Michigan Indiana and Ohio on October 11 1879 Edison had finished makeing a electric lightbulb

One year, Edison worked in Michigan, Indiana, and Ohio. On October 11, 1879, Edison had finished making a electric lightbulb.