Run-Ons
Comma-Splice
Incomplete Sentence (Fragment)
Unclear Sentences
STAAR Questions
100
Is this a run-on sentence? If yes, tell me how we could fix it.
I was tired I went to bed early.
What is a run-on. I was tired, so I went to bed early. OR I was tired. I went to bed early.
100
Is this sentence a comma-splice? If yes, tell me how to fix it.
I was hungry, I made a sandwich.
What is a comma-splice?
I was hungry, so I made a sandwich.
OR
I was hungry. I made a sandwich.
OR
I was hungry; I made a sandwich.
100
Is this a fragment (incomplete sentence)?
If yes, give me an example of how to correct it.
Went to the store to buy milk.
What is a fragment?
I went to the store to buy milk.
OR
She went to the store to buy milk.
OR
Bob went to the store to buy milk.
100
This is a wordy sentence:
Due to the fact that I was extremely tired, I made the decision to go to bed at an earlier time than usual.
Revise the sentence to be correct.
Since I was tired, I went to bed early.
OR
I was very tired, so I went to bed early.
100
(4) Systems in other countries where students can leave school with minimal debt can serve as models for solutions that we can adapt in the U.S.
C
Systems in other countries, where students can leave school with minimal debt, can serve as models for solutions that we can adapt in the U.S.
200
Is this a run-on sentence? If yes, tell me how to correct it.
We went to the store we bought milk eggs and bread we also got some fruit.
What is a run-on sentence.
We went to the store, and we bought milk, eggs, and bread. We also got some fruit.
OR
We went to the store; we bought milk, eggs, and bread. We also got some fruit.
200
Is this a comma-splice? If yes, tell me how to correct the sentence.
The test was hard, I didn’t study, I should have prepared better.
What is a comma-splice?
The test was hard because I didn't study. I should have prepared better.
OR
The test was hard; I didn't study. I should have prepared better.
OR
The test was hard. I didn't study, so I should have prepared better.
200
Is this a fragment (incomplete sentence)?
If yes, give me an example of how to correct it.
Running through the park on a sunny day.
What is a fragment?
I was running through the park on a sunny day.
OR
She enjoyed running through the park on a sunny day.
OR
Frank liked running through the park on a sunny day.
200
This is an unclear sentence.
After placing the book on the table, Sarah gave it to her.
Revise the sentence to be correct.
After Sarah placed the book on the table, she gave it to Emma.
OR
Sarah placed the book on the table, then handed it to Emma.
200
(4) By calling reputable sources “fake” the government is encouraging citizens not to believe the news even if it is true and can be backed up by science and data.
H
By calling reputable sources “fake,” the government is encouraging citizens not to believe the news, even if it is true and can be backed up by science and data.
300
Is this sentence a run-on? If yes, tell me how to fix it.
The dog barked loudly, and the neighbors complained, so the police came to check on the noise.
What is NOT a run-on.
300
Is this sentence a comma-splice? If yes, then tell me how to fix it.
We went to the amusement park, we rode all the roller coasters.
What is a comma-splice?
We went to the amusement park, and we rode all the roller coasters.
OR
We went to the amusement park. We rode all the roller coasters.
OR
We went to the amusement park; we rode all the roller coasters.
300
Is this a fragment (incomplete sentence)?
If yes, give me an example of how to correct it.
Because we were late to the movie.
What is a fragment?
Because we were late to the movie, we missed the previews.
OR
We were late to the movie, so we missed the previews.
300
This is a wordy sentence.
In my personal opinion, I think that the reason why the movie was enjoyable was because of the fact that it had an interesting and engaging plot.
Revise the sentence to be correct.
I enjoyed the movie because of its engaging plot.
OR
The movie was enjoyable because it had an interesting plot.
300
(13) Even if it isn’t based on science or facts, people everywhere twist facts to push along their system of belief.
J
Sentence 13 should not be revised.
400
Is this a run-on sentence? If yes, tell me how to correct it.
I wanted to stay home however my friends insisted we go out and I didn't want to disappoint them.
What is a run-on.
I wanted to stay home; however, my friends insisted we go out, and I didn't want to disappoint them.
OR
I wanted to stay home. However, my friends insisted we go out, and I didn't want to disappoint them.
400
Is this sentence a comma-splice? If yes, tell me how to fix it.
She enjoys painting, and she likes to use bright colors, her artwork is always full of energy.
What is a comma-splice?
She enjoys painting, and she likes to use bright colors. Her artwork is always full of energy.
400
Is this a fragment (incomplete sentence)?
If yes, give me an example of how to correct it.
The basketball team won the championship. Which was an incredible accomplishment.
What is a fragment?
The basketball team won the championship, which was an incredible accomplishment.
OR
The basketball team won the championship. It was incredible accomplishment.
400
This is a wordy sentence.
The reason for the committee's decision to make the changes to the policy was due to the fact that many students had voiced their concerns regarding the issue.
Revise the sentence to be correct.
The committee changed the policy because many students voiced concerns.
OR
The committee revised the policy after students expressed concerns.
400
(13) This possibility could be life-saving to many children who would be born illness free. (14) Along with this, there would be the ability of a longer lifespan in people who had their genes edited before they were born.
B
This possibility could be life-saving to many children, along with the ability of a longer lifespan in people who had their genes edited.
500
Is this a run-on sentence? If yes, tell me how to fix it.
The rain poured down, and the streets were flooded. Cars were stuck in traffic; some people abandoned their vehicles and walked home, while others waited for help.
What is NOT a run-on sentence.
500
Is this a comma-splice? If yes, tell me how to correct it.
I love reading books, however, I don’t always have time to do it.
What is a comma-splice?
I love reading books; however, I don't always have time to do it.
OR
I love reading books. However, I don't always have time to do it.
OR
I love reading books, but I don't always have time to do it.
500
Is this a fragment (incomplete sentence)?
If yes, give me an example of how to correct it.
A beautiful garden filled with roses, tulips, and daisies, blooming in the spring sunshine.
What is a fragment?
A beautiful garden filled with roses, tulips, and daisies was blooming in the spring sunshine.
OR
In the spring sunshine, a beautiful garden filled with roses, tulips, and daisies bloomed.
500
This is a wordy sentence.
It is important to note that, when it comes to making important and difficult decisions that have significant consequences, one should always take into consideration all possible options before making a final decision.
Revise the sentence to be correct.
When making difficult decisions, consider all options carefully.
OR
Always weigh your options before making an important decision.
500
(9) Survey results indicated residents’ satisfaction with their buyouts but the interviews showed a dearth of information and communication difficulties with the buyout process and feelings of a lack of choice (“the buyout as a foregone conclusion”).
A
Survey results indicated residents’ satisfaction with their buyouts. Still, the interviews showed a dearth of information and communication, difficulties with the buyout process, and feelings of a lack of choice (“the buyout as a foregone conclusion”).