Improve the Claim
I think that schools should offer students cash rewards for getting good grades in school, because it will encourage them to perform better in the future.
Schools should offer students cash rewards for getting good grades in school, because it will encourage them to perform better in the future.
Should teachers give less homework?
Good or Bad Claim? Why?
Students are not responsible for their actions.
Bad. The claim has no details.
What is our mascot?
Aztec
What is a claim?
The author's opinion or viewpoint.
Yes, we should try harder in class because we need to earn good grades.
Do you think students should be banned from playing games on school computers.
Students [should or should not] be banned from playing games on school computers, because DETAILS.
Good or Bad Quote? Why?
Students should not be allowed to listen to music during class because, if the music is too loud, it could distract others.
Good, because it makes sense, is focused, has details, shows ownership, and has an opinion.
Which step comes first:
Read your prompt OR Revise your essay.
Read your prompt.
What must a claim/thesis be? (HINT: 4 THINGS)
Teachers should give less homework, because DETAILS.
Should students have access to social media on school Wifi?
Students [should or should not] have access to social media on school Wifi, because DETAILS.
Yes, teachers should give more homework.
Finish the lyrics:
I'm working late 'cause __________
I'm a singer
A way to grab/catch the reader's attention.
Parents shouldn't ground their children.
Parents shouldn't ground their children, because DETAILS.
Should students have a vote on what the cafeteria serves for lunch?
Students [should or should not] have a vote on what the cafeteria serves for lunch?
I believe violent video games should be banned because they encourage bad behaviors.
No, this claim uses "I."
You need to come up with a PUN.
Ms. Cruz will decide
What is an anecdote?
Teachers should not.
Teachers should not PICK A TOPIC, because DETAILS.
Should students be allowed to wear their hoods in class?
Students [should or should not] be allowed to wear their hoods in class.
No, it doesn't say who should go to bed earlier, and there are no details.
What is Ms. Cruz's favorite color?
Green
What is a rhetorical question?
A question we don't really want the answer to.