AP Style
Quotes
Modifiers
Misused and confused words
Objectivity
100

You're writing a story about a musician who is going on tour. Which of these cities should you include their state? 

Cleveland, Denver, Columbus, Seattle, Washington, Fort Lauderdale. 

What is: 

Columbus and Fort Lauderdale

100

It is the first time you are quoting President Bloomberg in your article. You have not introduced her before this quote. How should you attribute this quote to her? 

"I've heard about the mice in the dorms," ____. "I propose we try to lure them out with swiss cheese." 

What is: 

"I've heard about the mice in the dorms," Cleveland State President Laura Bloomberg said. "I propose we try to lure them out with swiss cheese."

100
Correct this sentence:


The president's economic policy is one thing he disagrees with. 

What is:

The president's economic policy is one thing with which he disagrees. OR: He disagrees with the president's economic policy. 

100

If I were to be writing about a change in dress length made by a tailor, which word would I use? (Explain why)

Alter OR Altar

What is Alter.

100

Is this sentence objective?

Her hair was unique.

What is:

No, stick to the facts!

200

You interviewed a student in their second year at CSU for a recent article. Should you capitalize "sophomore" when describing them? 

What is:

No, unless "sophomore" began the sentence. 

200

Oh no! You forgot to ask the name of a person you interviewed at a recent club event. (Shame!) What should you do with the quote? 

What is: 

Don't use it. Unless you can hunt them down and ask for their name, you should not include an unattributed quote.  

200

Correct this sentence:

He chose to boldy go where no one has gone before.

What is:

He chose to go boldly where no one has gone before.

200

Describe the difference between these three words: 

Allusion

Elusion

Illusion

What is:

Allusion: a casual mention

Elusion: an escape

Illusion: erroneous perception or belief.

200

Make this sentence objective:

His sparkly purple pants were rather unusual.

What is:

He worse sparkly purple pants.

300

Correct this sentence: 

The Cleveland State University Men's Basketball team defeated Robert Morris University 90-82. 

What is:

The Cleveland State University men's basketball team defeated Robert Morris University 90-82. 

300

Punctuate this quote correctly:

So then I say to him what are you trying to pull?

What is:

"So then I say to him, 'What are you trying to pull?'"

300

Correct the dangling participle in this sentence:

Running down the street, his hat flew off. 

What is:

His hat flew off while he was running down the street.

300

If I were to be writing a sentence about someone who uses a marketing agency for their brand, what word would I describe them as?

Client OR Customer

What is a client.

300

What is wrong with this sentence?

Bloomberg had a troubling response, stating that Chick-fil-a would be closed during the summer. 

What is:

Remove the word troubling. Instead, the sentence should be: Bloomberg stated that Chick-fil-a would be closed during the summer.

400

What is wrong with this sentence?

The students came in with tired eyes, energy drinks, and study guides. 

What is: 

Oxford comma! It should read: 

The students came in with tired eyes, energy drinks and study guides. 

400

You've already used a massive amount of quotes from one interviewee in a story. How can you rewrite this quote to avoid too much repetition? 

"I am young, but I am wise." 

What is:

She said she was young but she was wise. 

400

Correct this sentence:

Standing on her head, he watched the yoga teacher. 

What is: 

He watched the yoga teacher standing on her head.

400

Describe the difference between these two words:

Irritate

Aggravate

What is:

Irritate: to make the skin itch

Aggravate: to make worse. (Only existing conditions are aggravated.) 

400
Make this sentence objective:

Dr. Horowitz allegedly stole Dr. Jirik's favorite mug. 

What is:

When Dr. Jirik's favorite mug went missing, he said he saw Dr. Horowitz run into the conference room. 

500

You interviewed Dr. Thomas for a recent story. When introducing her in the article, which is the correct format regarding her doctorate?

CSU Professor Dr. Beth Thomas tried to dress up her cat in a sparkly outfit.

CSU Professor Beth Thomas, Ph.D., tried to dress up her cat in a sparkly outfit.

CSU Professor Beth Thomas, who has a doctorate in educational psychology, tried to dress up her cat in a sparkly outfit.

What is:

CSU Professor Beth Thomas, who has a doctorate in educational psychology, tried to dress up her cat in a sparkly outfit.

500

You recently went to a strike in the CSU courtyard that was led by faculty members who were upset over recent employment changes. You got a great picture to pair with a quote, but your interviewee asked to remain anonymous. The photo could put faculty members at risk of being targeted by administration. 

1) Attribute this quote: "I'm so fed up with these changes. It's absolutely immoral." ________.

2) What should you do with the picture? 

What is: 

1) "I'm so fed up with these changes," an anonymous source said. "It's absolutely immoral." 

2) Use photoshop to blur the faces and identifying qualities of the protesters. 

500

Find what is wrong in this sentence:

He was a tall, hispanic male.

What is:

He was a tall hispanic male.

500

Create a sentence for each of these words that uses them correctly: 

Complement

Compliment

What is:


Complement: to complete by supplementing.

Compliment: to praise. 

500

Rewrite this sentence to make it objective:

The tragic death of the spectacular hamster, Gunther, occurred Friday morning.

What is:

The death of Gunther, a hamster, occurred Friday morning.