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Celia’s favorite art, activity painting, makes her happy.
Celia’s favorite art activity, painting, makes her happy.
On Saturday Natan and Cole went mountain biking.
On Saturday, Natan and Cole went mountain biking.
Our school St. George is over 100 years old.
Our school, St. George, is over 100 years old.
I want to get better at reading so I read every night.
I want to get better at reading, so I read every night.
My favorite colors are dark green blue orange and yellow.
My favorite colors are dark green, blue, orange, and yellow.
Anisha covered her wall, in pictures, of her guinea pig, Vanilla.
Anisha covered her wall in pictures of her guinea pig, Vanilla.
Over break Danika made crescent rolls.
Over break, Danika made crescent rolls.
Jude enjoys eating his favorite food sushi.
Jude enjoys eating his favorite food, sushi.
Today is Barron's Mom's birthday so he made her a card.
Today is Barron's Mom's birthday, so he made her a card.
Do you want to go to the movies the park or the mall?
Do you want to go to the movies, the park, or the mall?
My library teacher, Mrs. Hart likes to read books.
My library teacher, Mrs. Hart, likes to read books.
To meet their goal Malia and Celia delivered cookies all weekend.
To meet their goal, Malia and Celia delivered cookies all weekend.
Some 4th graders like Takis spicy flavored corn chips.
Some 4th graders like Takis, spicy flavored corn chips.
Lewis and Clark planned to travel across new land but they didn't know what was out there.
Lewis and Clark planned to travel across new land, but they didn't know what was out there.
It rained hailed sleeted and then got sunny!
It rained, hailed, sleeted, and then it got sunny!
I went to the store but I forgot my money at home.
I went to the store, but I forgot my money at home.
During reading class Ashly volunteered to read.
During reading class, Ashly volunteered to read.
My teacher Ms. Bellia has a dog named Ben.
My teacher, Ms. Bellia, has a dog named Ben.
I couldn't stay awake in Zoom class so I started going to bed earlier.
I couldn't stay awake in Zoom class, so I started going to bed earlier.
Please check out a book find a quiet place to sit and read for 20 minutes.
Please check out a book, find a quiet place to sit, and read for 20 minutes.
This Sunday I want to go the beach, but I have to finish my iReady first.
This Sunday, I want to go the beach, but I have to finish my iReady first.
Even though every 4th grader went to bed on time they were all still tired on Monday.
Even though every 4th grader went to bed on time, they were all still tired on Monday.
Mae Jemison the first African American woman to become an astronaut inspires me.
Mae Jemison, the first African American woman to become an astronaut, inspires me.
I was early to class but I got booted off Zoom so I had to rejoin.
I was early to class, but I got booted off Zoom, so I had to rejoin.
My chores are to empty the dishwasher clean my room wash the car feed the dog and sweep the kitchen floor.
My chores are to empty the dishwasher, clean my room, wash the car, feed the dog, and sweep the kitchen floor.