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100

My teacher Mrs. Greenson is a world renowned martial artist.

My teacher, Mrs. Greenson, is a world renowned martial artist.

100

Jamal said “Every 60 seconds in Africa a minute passes.”

Jamal said, “Every 60 seconds in Africa, a minute passes.”

100

Ethan is wearing a camouflage mask but he is winking.

Ethan is wearing a camouflage mask, but he is winking.


100

To win the game you have to do all your tasks.

To win the game, you have to do all your tasks.



200

Mr. Greenson attended primary school with Mrs. Greenson and Dave Carlson a successful painter.

Mr. Greenson attended primary school with Mrs. Greenson and Dave Carlson, a successful painter.

200

Shrek Danny Devito and Keanu Reeves went to visit me in the hospital. The Avengers were there too surprisingly.

Shrek, Danny Devito, and Keanu Reeves went to visit me in the hospital. The Avengers were there too, surprisingly.

200

Today is October 31 Halloween and everyone is dressed up.

Today is October 31, Halloween, and everyone is dressed up.

200

I was doing a task in electrical but died before I could finish.

Correct

300

Mrs. Greenson prefers to have apples cranberries and blueberries over sugar that can rot her teeth such as lollipops StarburstsⓇ  and gummy bears.

Mrs. Greenson prefers to have apples, cranberries, and blueberries over sugar that can rot her teeth, such as lollipops, StarburstsⓇ , and gummy bears.

300

Shaq said "Understandable. Have a great day."



Shaq said, "Understandable. Have a great day."

300

Siddarth is very weirdly imitating Sarah, today.

Siddarth is very weirdly imitating Sarah today.

300

I was neither suspicious nor imposter.

I was neither suspicious, nor imposter.

400

Emanuel Greenson was about to graduate secondary school when Rodrick his dog passed away.

Emanuel Greenson was about to graduate secondary school, when Rodrick, his dog, passed away.

400

Shrek left the scene of the accident and went back to the swamp.

Correct

400

My friend Ani, is friends with Josiah who is very whimsical and should be kicked from the Edlin discord where he doesn’t belong.

My friend Ani is friends with Josiah, who is very whimsical and should be kicked from the Edlin discord, where he doesn’t belong.

400

Black called an emergency meeting. “I saw White vent” he announced “and I think I saw Cyan kill Pink.”

Black called an emergency meeting. “I saw White vent,” he announced, “and I think I saw Cyan kill Pink.”

500

Mr. Greenson knew that his wife Emily Greenson could become a very successful martial artist and she did.

Mr. Greenson knew that his wife, Emily Greenson, could become a very successful martial artist, and she did.

500

When Shrek is tired he sits back relaxes protects his swamp and watches over every child and donkey within a 10 mile radius.

When Shrek is tired, he sits back, relaxes, protects his swamp, and watches over every child and donkey within a 10 mile radius.

500

In Athens Greece while I was walking on the trail eating flaming hot cheetos I saw a big fat ugly green bearded dragon.

In Athens, Greece, while I was walking on the trail eating flaming hot cheetos, I saw a big, fat, ugly, green, bearded dragon.

500

When I was a crew mate I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped and I swiped but I couldn’t do the task!

- When I was a crew mate,

- After every "and I swiped"

- ,but I couldn't do the task!