vocabulary
couward
coward
break up with you boyfriend
break up with your boyfriend
beatiful
beautiful
it appeared on social media platform during 2018
it appeared on social media platforms during 2018
...they romanticise the hardships and the heavyworks in the rural area....
...they romanticise the hardships and the demanding work in the rural area....
'heavy work' ok
photos are overediting
photos are overedited
the article mentiones....
the article mentions....
....including land grabbing, child labour, corruption.
....including land grabbing, child labour, and corruption.
blured line
blurred line
know how to distinct reality from the acts in the videos
know how to distinguish reality from the acts in the videos
intense
correct!
not intens or intence
I agree that this can have harmful consequences, however I find that this article exaggerates....
I agree that this can have harmful consequences; however, I find that this article exaggerates....
or 'consequences. However, I find...'
I find this article bad because it is bending the truth to sound like....
unfair, unreasonable, biased, dishonest, disingenuous
This subculture doesn't include the violent and discriminant contents...
This subculture doesn't include the violent and discriminatory contents...
article
correct!
article, not articel
...we should notice more the challenges they face, such as slavery on plantations...
...we should notice more the challenges they have faced, such as slavery on plantations...
misconception
correct!
....the main cause of so many women are bullied...
....the main cause of so many women being bullied...
The Renessance
The Renaissance
...nostalgic feelings for the freedom and nature...
...nostalgic feelings for the freedom and nature...