Finding Errors
"In the end, things happened, and, well, you know what I mean. It's all connected, sort of." What’s wrong with this conclusion?
Everything, they did not connect any points, way too vague, just horrible.
What makes a good conclusion?
A. Webs
B. Reminding
C. Rewording
D. All the above
D, all points mentioned make a GREAT conclusion
A conclusion is meant to summarize the entire essay.
False, a conclusion is meant to wrap up all main points the writer introduced in the main body paragraphs
"All these reasons show why dogs should not be allowed in restaurants". What’s wrong with this conclusion sample?
It’s TOO vague & gave NO elaboration.
What’s the purpose of a conclusion in an essay?
TO SUMMARIZE KEY POINTS & GIVE A FINAL THOUGHT
Rewording is key to a good conclusion.
True, rewording is crucial in a conclusion to summarize key points and leave a lasting impact.
"That's why dogs should not be allowed in restaurants because they can be too energetic and that's why cats should not be allowed in restaurants either". Whats wrong with this sample?
They went off topic which is a big NO-NO
How long should a conclusion be?
A. 1 sentence
B. 3-5 sentences (a paragraph)
C. 7+ sentences
B, shouldn’t be too short or long.
A good conclusion must be vague to engage the reader & help raise up question.
False, it’s the complete opposite.
"Dogs should not be allowed in restaurants.They can scare people, they can be messy, and they could give allergies.That's why dogs should not be allowed in restaurant." What’s wrong with this conclusion?
They didn’t elaborate at all and did not use webs.
When main points are tied & the thesis has been restated in a new way, what is it called?
ITS CALLED A GOOD CONCLUSION!!!
A good conclusion should leave a positive impression on the reader.
TRUE, that’s a big thing to consider when writing your conclusion.
"Thus, although dogs can help people in need or have proper training, allowing them to go into public spaces like restaurants can do more damage than good. They can cause chaos and impose health risks to citizens. Dogs are social animals and for this reason they can get rowdy or emotional. Admist the disturbance of peace, someone in the building can have serious dog allergies and cause further chaos. Dogs should be allowed in big spaces like parks but not in area where there is not so much space, spaces like restaurants." What’s wrong with this conclusio?
ABSOLUTELY NOTHING ITS PERFECT, it ties back the main points and thesis. It further elaborates the points made and is very engaging.
What elements should be included in a strong conclusion for an essay?
A call-to-action, reiterate the thesis statement, and leave a lasting impression.
A way to make the thesis more alive & easy to read is having a variety of word choices.
True, that’s the whole point of rewording we need it to be more interesting and ALIVE.