The sentence is: There dog is really cute!
What is : Their dog is really cute! (CHANGE THERE TO THEIR)
The sentence is: Did you know, for example, that there is a fish that can climb trees.
What is: Did you know, for example, that there is a fish that can climb trees? (CHANGE THE PERIOD TO A QUESTION MARK)
The sentence is: I am going too the zoo this weekend.
What is: I am going TO the zoo this weekend.
The sentence is: The pumpkin should weigh at least 500 pounds the best ones are usually closer to 700 pounds.
What is: The pumpkin should weigh at least 500 pounds, but the best ones are usually closer to 700 pounds. (INSERT COMMA AND CONJUNCTION - "BUT")
The sentence is: Your going to have to finish the test before you can play a game on the computer.
What is: YOU'RE (YOU ARE) going to have to finish the test before you can play a game on the computer.
The sentence is: How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees!
What is: How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees? (CHANGE EXCLAMATION POINT TO QUESTION MARK)
The sentence is: Did you loose your book?
What is: Did you LOSE your book?
The sentence is: Cameron asked, can we have pizza and ice cream for dinner?
What is: Cameron asked, "Can we have pizza and ice cream for dinner?" INSERT QUOTATION MARKS BEGINNING AND END
The sentence is: Believe it or not some people do not like pizza.
What is: Believe it or not, some people do not like pizza.
The sentence is: It was beginning to get late but Dad kept his promise.
What is: It was beginning to get late,(COMMA) but Dad kept his promise.