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One day i escaped the zoo. The zoo was near the ocean and i was a shark. It was really Easy to escape.

One day I escaped the zoo. The zoo was near the ocean and I was a shark. It was really easy to escape.

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Would you rather be big or small?


Pending how small a monkey is.

It depends how small a monkey is.

100

I would rather be big because you could wind fire does every anyone you want to fight.

I would rather be big because you could win fights.  I could fight anyone I want to fight.

200

Play videos games with my friend i like is that I have nothing elsa. Want to join?

The best thing to do on a rainy day is to play video games with my friend. What I like the most is that I have nothing else to do. Want to join?

200

I would eat beef because is really good and it’s healthy for your body.

I would eat beef because it is really good and it’s healthy for your body.

200

The best thing to do on a rainy day a stay at home play with your friends.And do fun stuff with your family.

The best thing to do on a rainy day is to stay at home and play with your friends.  You can also do fun stuff with your family.

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If I had a pet I would love about protecting me from that random strangers or an old man who is trying to kidnap me. Like it’s like it’s like of my best friend I can see that and it’s a fan part of the family.

If I had a pet, I would love that was protecting me from that random stranger or an old man who is trying to kidnap me. It’s like one of my best friends. I can see that it's special and it’s a part of the family.

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What I like about my pet is that they are cute

What I like about my pet is that it is cute.

                      OR

What I like about my pets is that they are cute.

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My favorite thing to do at recess is play is wall ball. Because it's fun and all my friends playing.

My favorite thing to do at recess is to play  wall ball. I like this game because it's fun and all my friends play.

400

        Pancakes. Because they taste really good especially with the chocolate chips on them. And they look really healthy they have.

     My favorite food is  pancakes because they taste really good, especially with the chocolate chips on them! They look really healthy. They have carbs to give you energy.

400

I never gone into a hot air balloon.

I have never been in a hot air balloon.

          OR

I have never gone into a hot air balloon.

400

If I could have a new activity I would be umpiring baseball games. Because it would make me a lot of money. And it’s fun.

If I could have a new activity, I would be umpiring baseball games. I would do this because it would make me a lot of money, and it’s fun.

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Gaming The only reason I why I choose gaming is that I really like it. And you could help us with stuff and I’m like I’m like some video games are educated educated like Minecraft ninja kids game so we can play that then. I am like Roblox with like roebucks you can make new friends so we can have a gaming part of t  

A new school subject should be gaming. The only reason why I chose gaming is that I really like it. Teachers could help us with stuff. Some video games are educational like Minecraft and  Ninja Kids game. I like Roblox with Roebucks. You can make new friends so we can have a gaming party.

500

I’m a monkey at the zoo how I escape is I did parkour and claimed it out of my enclosure because it had no ceiling so I climbed out and ran off to the wild.

I’m a monkey at the zoo. How I escape is I did parkour and climbed out of my enclosure because it had no ceiling! So I climbed out and ran off to the wild.

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 Things I like about my cat is he doesn’t hurt we don’t have to take care of him a lot or we need to do the simple things but cats don’t take that long to take care of and they’re fine they’re cute they’re cuddly the friendly.

 The things I like about my cat is that he doesn’t hurt me. We don’t have to take care of him a lot , and we need to just do the simple things. Cats don’t take that long to take care of and they’re fine alone. They’re cute, cuddly, and friendly.