Structure
What are the three parts of a description of a place or event?
Introduction, Body, Conclusion
Give one phrase you can use to begin a description.
“It is commonly believed that…” or “At first glance…”
What’s wrong with saying “The event was amazing”?
It’s too vague; it doesn’t explain why or give details.
Name 3 senses you can describe in a place.
Sight, sound, smell
True or False: “Times Square is in London.”
False
What is the purpose of the introduction in a description?
To give a general overview and capture the reader’s attention
Complete the phrase: “One of the most striking features is…”
“…its vibrant colors and lively atmosphere.”
Why is it important to avoid mixing verb tenses?
It confuses the reader and breaks the flow of the description.
What makes a description more immersive and vivid?
Using sensory details and personal impressions
What is the main feature described in the Times Square sample?
Bright lights, billboards, energy, and popularity
In a description of an event, what should the body include?
Sequence of activities, atmosphere, people attending
Which phrase would you use to explain a result?
“As a result of…” or “This leads to…”
What kind of detail is missing in this sentence: “The park was beautiful”?
Sensory details (sound, smell, touch...)
Rewrite: “The restaurant was dark and had tables.”
“The soft glow of candles lit the dark room, and the scent of freshly baked bread filled the air around the wooden tables.”
Why is “The city never sleeps” a cliché?
Because it’s overused and not very original
How does the conclusion of a place description differ from that of an event?
Place: why it's worth visiting; Event: personal feelings and recommendation
What’s a phrase you can use to compare two places?
“Unlike…” / “In comparison to…” / “Similar to…”
Fix this sentence: “I was watching the sun goes down.”
“I was watching the sun go down.”
What sense is missing? “The market was full of colors and noise.”
Smell, touch, or taste
Rewrite this vague sentence: “The beach was nice.”
“The golden sand was warm, the sea sparkled under the sun, and the sound of waves created a relaxing atmosphere.”
Write a full conclusion for a description of a music festival.
“In conclusion, the music festival was an unforgettable experience full of joy, energy, and connection. I would definitely recommend it to anyone who loves live music and fun.”
Use two useful phrases in a short paragraph about a beach.
“At first glance, the beach looks calm and peaceful. One of the most striking features is the golden sand that stretches for miles.”
Identify 3 mistakes: “The festival are great, people dancing and it’s full of music.”
1) “are” → “was” 2) missing verb: “people were dancing” 3) inconsistent tense: “it’s” → “it was”
Describe a park using at least 4 senses in one paragraph.
“The warm sun touched my skin as I walked through the park. The scent of grass and flowers filled the air, while birds sang from the trees. I could hear children laughing and feel the crunch of gravel under my feet.”
Create a short description of a local place using the correct structure and vivid details.
(Free answe, but must have introduction, sonsor details and conclusion)