SENSORY DETAILS
DESCRIPTION
IMPROVING sentences
BUILD-A-PARAGRAPH
100

This sense helps you describe how something looks.

Sight 

100

What part of speech describes nouns?

adjectives

100

Fix this sentence:
“The food was good.”

“The food was delicious and flavorful.

100

100
Write ONE descriptive sentence about a classroom.

The classroom was bright and lively, filled with colourful charts and the sound of students chatting.

200

Name TWO senses (other than sight) used in descriptive writing.

smell, taste, touch, or hearing

200

Give TWO adjectives under (looks) to describe a person.

tall, beautiful 


200

Add detail:
“The room was messy.”

“The room was cluttered with clothes and scattered books.”

200

One sentence describing a rainy day

The rainy day was gloomy and wet, with dark clouds covering the sky and water dripping from every surface

300

Give ONE example of a sentence that uses sound.

The birds chirped loudly in the trees.

300

Improve this sentence using adjectives:
“The girl is nice.”

“The girl is kind and friendly.”

300

Make this more vivid:
“The dog ran.”

“The dog sprinted across the field.”

300

Describe a person (2 adjectives + 1 action)

👉 The tall, cheerful boy laughed loudly as he shared jokes with his friends.

400

Why are sensory details important?

They help the reader imagine and experience the scene.

400

 What is wrong with this sentence?
“The big, large, huge dog barked.”

Too repetitive / overuse of similar adjectives

400

What is missing?
“The boy walked.”

fix the sentence. 

Details / adjectives / adverbs

400

Two sentences describing a market

The market was crowded and noisy, filled with vendors shouting and people moving quickly. The smell of fresh fruits and spices filled the air as bright colours surrounded every stall.

500

Add a sensory detail:
“The market was busy.”

“The market buzzed with loud voices and the smell of fresh fruit.”

500

Replace “very big” with a stronger word.

enormous / gigantic

500

Rewrite using sensory detail:
“The beach was nice.”

“The beach had soft sand and the sound of crashing waves.”

500

3–4 sentence paragraph: “A busy school morning”

The school morning was chaotic and energetic as students rushed through the gates. Loud chatter filled the air while teachers gave instructions and bells rang sharply. The hallways were crowded with movement, and the atmosphere felt busy and exciting.