What's Wrong?
"Tell me how great I am." said Jimmy.
"Tell me how great I am," said Jimmy.
Period should be a comma after "am"
"Where am I" asked Ms. Hulme.
"Where am I?" asked Ms. Hulme.
Question mark missing.
Tina shouted- "You are my favorite person!"
Tina shouted, "You are my favorite person!"
Dash should be a comma.
I'm a piranha, Darla said.
"I'm a piranha," Darla said. (missing quotation marks)
"Why are you doing this to me!" asked Frank.
"Why are you doing this to me?" asked Frank.
Question mark instead of exclamation point.
"My name is Bob!" shouted Bill
"My name is Bob!" shouted Bill.
Missing period at end of sentence
"What's wrong?" Asked Joe.
"What's wrong?" asked Joe.
Lower case a.
"You," Jimmy Jr. said "are a terrible person."
"You," Jimmy Jr. said, "are a terrible person.
Missing comma after said.
"You are the bomb diggity" Exclaimed Peg.
"You are the bomb diggity!" exclaimed Peg.
Add exclamation point and change upper case E to lower case e.
"Purple is my favorite color" said Daisy
"Purple is my favorite color," said Daisy.
Comma missing after color, period missing after Daisy.