Revising and Editing
Terms
Figurative Language
Tone
Random
100

The people hung 280 lanterns on the tree’s branches lighting up the night sky. 

A. Change 280 to two-hundred-eighty

B. Change tree’s to trees

C. Add a comma after branches

D. Change night to nightly

C. Add a comma after branches

100

 a message or lesson the poet/author is trying to show you in their writing

Theme

100

"We were diamonds in the night." 

Is an example of

Metaphor

100

Which tone is represented in the following passage? Wow! With a top speed of one hundred fifty miles per hour, that car can almost fly!

A. Calm

B. Annoyed

C. Scary

D. Excited

D. Excited

100

How many bones are in the human body?

206

200

 If Jackson High adopts a dress code the students won’t be able to express themselves.

 A. Change if to because 

B. Add a comma after code

C. Change students to students’

D. Change themselves to theirselves

B. Add a comma after code

200

A word or phrase that creates a bridge between two ideas is called a:

Transition

200

giving human-like characteristics to non-human things or abstract ideas

Personification

200

Which tone is represented in the following passage? She delicately placed the cooing baby on a soft, freshly cleaned blanket.

A. Calm

B. Annoyed

C. Scary

D. Excited

A. Calm

200

Solve the Analogy: 

warm : hot :: ______ : hilarious

A. humid     B. raucous      C. summer     D. amusing

D. Amusing 

300

The narrator describes her mother’s belief that you can be anything you want to be in America even famous.

you add a comma after 

A. describes    B. belief      C. be       D. America

D. America 

300

the general character or attitude of a place, piece of writing, situation, etc

Tone

300

As big as an elephant 

Is an example of....

Simile

300

Which tone is represented in the following passage? As that hurricane threatened, the wind's blast caused angry fifteen-foot waves to crash over the small houses near the shore.

A. Calm

B. Annoyed

C. Scary

D. Excite

C. Scary 

300

Solve the Analogy: 

Ms. Perez : seniors :: _______ : freshmen


Mr. Shepard

400

Ms. Jillian our science teacher, has assigned us an exciting new project. 

What Change needs to be made?

A. Insert a comma before our

B. Remove comma after teacher

C. Change science to sceince

D.  Make no change

A. Insert a comma before our

400

a state of affairs or an event that seems deliberately contrary to what one expects and is often amusing as a result

Irony

400

The sky misses the sun at night

Personification 

400

Which tone is represented in the following passage? Ugh! Do I really have to sit through another boring lecture on data entry again?  

A. Calm

B. Annoyed

C. Scary

D. Excited

B. Annoyed

400

How many Fast and Furious movies have been made?

10

500

For many years, dr. Irene Pepperberg has been working with parrots. 

F. Change For to After

G. Delete the comma after years

H. Change dr. to Dr.

J. Make no change

H. Change dr. to Dr.

500

This sentence includes your answer to the question, or your claim. It should be included in your introduction.

Thesis statement

500

Using the image of the American flag to represent patriotism and a love for one's country is an example of .......

Symbolism 

500

What is the tone of the following passage? The alarm buzzed. Jordan smashed her fist down on it--hard. It flew off the nightstand and bounced off her cat, Armstrong. The cat yowled indignantly and rocketed out the room.

A. Eerie 

B. Sarcastic

C. Passionate

D. Humorous

D. Humorous 

500

What fictional town does Spongebob live in?

Bikini Bottom