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Verb Agreement
100

Here, there is no malicious intent, unlike the plaintiff in Marsh, CJ was honestly trying to raise public awareness of corruption rather than tarnish anyone's reputation. 

Here, there is no malicious intent (PERIOD) Unlike the plaintiff in Marsh...

100

Full cite: Pommier v. Marsh, 88 F.2d 318, 324.

Full cite: Pommier v. Marsh, 88 F.2d 318, 324 (COURT AND YEAR). 

100
When COVID spread, it will cause a total economic shutdown.

When COVID spreads, it will cause a total economic shutdown. 


OR


When COVID spread, it caused a total economic shutdown.

100

First, should final determination of the constitutional validity of the President's order be made in this case which has proceeded no further than the preliminary injunction stage? Second, if so, is the seizure order within the constitutional power of the President?

Issue/Question

100

Plaintiff argues that she have succesfully rebutted the no-fault presumption.

Plaintiff argues that she HAS succesfully rebutted the no-fault presumption.

300

While there is no disagreement on mitigation, defense concedes in briefing that Jake adequately mitigated, the question of damages remains open. 

While there is no disagreement on mitigation (DASH) defense concedes in briefing that Jake adequately mitigated (DASH) the question of damages remains open. 

300

Short Form: Pommier, 88 F.2d 318. 

Short Form: Pommier, 88 F.2d at ##

300

My first week is really stressful. We had assignments, quizzes, and so much reading!

My first week WAS really stressful. We had assignments, quizzes, and so much reading!


OR


My first week is really stressful. We HAVE assignments, quizzes, and so much reading!

300

The order cannot properly be sustained as an exercise of the President's military power as Commander in Chief of the Armed Forces.

Holding

300

For the commerce clause be used correctly, we must to apply the right standard. 

For teh commerce clause TO be used correctly, we must APPLY the right standard. 

500
Plaintiff has failed to prove the prima facie case for the tort of battery- while the court may find that the defendant's action was offensive, there is no foundation for concluding that such an act was an intentional.

Plaintiff has failed to prove the prima facie case for the tort of battery (COLON or SEMICOLON) while the court may find that the defendant's action was offensive, there is no foundation for concluding that such an act was an intentional.

500

Full cite: Marsh v. Pommier, 12 F.3d 220 (9th Cir. 2010) (holding that dogs are, indeed, superior to cats).

Full cite: Marsh v. Pommier, 12 F.3d 220, PINCITE (9th Cir. 2010) (holding that dogs are, indeed, superior to cats).

500

The lower court holding that the plaintiff was not entitled to summary judgment because they did not show that there was no genuine dispute as to any material fact. 

The lower court HELD that the plaintiff was not entitled to summary judgment because they did not show that there was no genuine dispute as to any material fact.

500

 In the framework of our Constitution, the President's power to see that the laws are faithfully executed refutes the idea that he is to be a lawmaker. The Constitution limits his functions in the lawmaking process to the recommending of laws he thinks wise and the vetoing of laws he thinks bad. And the Constitution is neither silent nor equivocal about who shall make laws which the President is to execute.

Reasoning/Rationale

500

Entering, crossing, or present on private property without a license is a trespass. 

Entering, crossing, or BEING present on private property without a license is a trespass.