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There toys are not put away.
Their toys are not put away.
They have two daughters two sons and two dog's.
They have two daughters, two sons, and two dogs.
Oh grandma, what big eyes you have cried little red riding hood.
"Oh Grandma, what big eyes you have!" cried Little Red Riding Hood.
Although the sun was shineing it was cold today.
Although the sun was shining, it was cold today.
I know your disappointed in Rachel but she is still a good friend.
I know you're disappointed in Rachel, but she is still a good friend.
No my birthday isn't until next wednesday.
No, my birthday isn't until next Wednesday.
Mrs. Lester my third grade teacher is my favorite.
Mrs. Lester, my third grade teacher, is my favorite.
My Father took a trip to miami florida and he brought back seashells.
My father took a trip to Miami, Florida, and he brought back seashells.
They're dog's are always playing in there yard.
Their dogs are always playing in their yard.
My grandparent's got married on July 8 1952.
My grandparents got married on July 8, 1952.
Will grandpa be ok today or do we have to take care of him.
Will Grandpa be ok today, or do we have to take care of him?
My brother and me always like to go to the store to get candy.
My brother and I always like to go to the store to get candy.
November 2 2016 will always be a day devoted to fans of the chicago cubs.
November 2, 2016 will always be a day devoted to fans of the Chicago Cubs.
At the beginning of the math lesson, I was confused, but I eventually got it.
Several students enjoy going to a party at Toms house.
Several students enjoy going to a party at Tom's house.