Correct the Sentence
Ms. Roussos worked at red robin.
Red Robin needs to be capitalized
True or False? Editing makes your paper look better.
True!
What does revising do to your paper?
It makes it sound better!
What is wrong with this sentence?
At the beginning of the school year, I was scard of my new gym teacher.
The word scared is spelled wrong!
What is one thing editing and revising both do to your paper?
Helping the reader read smoothly
Or
Improving the quality of writing
are acceptable answers!
What type of words should you add to your paper while revising?
Silver dollar words!
What is wrong with this sentence?
"Your mom is here" said Mr.C
What should you indent in your paper?
While revising, come up with interesting ____ and _______.
leads and hooks!
What is wrong with this sentence?
I love are class at BDMS.
are needs to be changed to our.
What should you add, delete, or change while editing?
punctuation!
True!
What is wrong with this sentence?
I went to my brother's House last night and had pizza.
The H in house should be lowercase.
What should you correct while editing?
Which sentence needs to be revised? why?
I went to my brother's house.
Yesterday, I sat outside in the blazing heat.
I went to my brother's house needs to be revised because I need to add specific details.