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Snakes lizards crocodiles and turtles are reptiles
Snakes, lizards, crocodiles, and turtles are reptiles.
the hawaiian islands are located in the pacific ocean.
The Hawaiian islands are located in the Pacific Ocean.
Saturn is a huge planet it is more than nine times larger than earth.
Saturn is a huge planet. It is more than nine times larger than earth.
As the whole family loaded into the car.
KAREN SNEEZED as the whole family loaded into the car.
Or something like that.
Hunters please use caution when hunting there are hikers on the trail.
Hunters, please use caution when hunting. There are hikers on the trail.
Some turtles live on land others live in lakes streams or oceans
Some turtles live on land, others live in lakes, streams, or oceans.
Hawaii officially became the Fiftieth state in the united states in 1959.
Hawaii officially became the fiftieth state in the United States in 1959.
Saturn is covered by clouds, it is circled by bands of color.
Saturn is covered by clouds. It is circled by bands of color.
Saturn is covered by clouds and is circled by bands of color.
When we arrived at the airport.
When we arrived at the airport SOMETHING HAPPENED.
We found out our flight was delayed when we arrived at the airport.
No loitering tables are for eating customers.
No loitering. Tables are for customers only. (Or something like that- This sentence is just silly anyway).
Since some species of tortoises are endangered they cannot be sold as pets
Since some species of tortoises are endangered, they cannot be sold as pets.
iolani palace, a national historic landmark, is the only official state residence of royalty in the united states.
Iolani Palace, a national historic landmark, is the only official state residence of royalty in the United States.
Many of Saturn's moons have large craters the crater on Mimas covers one third of its diameter.
Many of Saturn's moons have large craters. The crater on Mimas covers one third of its diameter.
My sister and I down to the river.
My sister and I WENT/RAN/ROLLED/WERE DRAGGED/SOME VERB down to the river.
After we left Grandma Mommy and I skipped about in the park.
After we left, Grandma, Mommy and I skipped about in the park.
After we left Grandma, Mommy and I skipped about in the park.
Living in fresh water soft-shelled turtles have long flexible beaks
Living in fresh water, soft-shelled turtles have long, flexible beaks.
next summer we are going to disneyworld for two Weeks in august.
Next summer we are going to Disneyworld for two weeks in august.
Mocking birds are great mimics they can imitate the songs of at least twenty other bird species.
Mocking birds are great mimics. They can imitate the songs of at least twenty other bird species.
The bird nest in the top of the oak tree.
The bird nest IS in the top of the oak tree.
or
There is a bird nest in the top of the oak tree.
or something like that.
I enjoy cooking my family and friends.
I enjoy cooking, my family, and friends.
Most turtles can pull their heads legs and tail into their shell however sea turtles cannot do so
Most turtles can pull their heads, legs, and tail into their shell, however, sea turtles cannot do so.
Lynne decided that jack And glen would go to the san Diego zoo with her so they can all ride Together.
Lynne decided that Jack and Glen would go to the San Diego Zoo with her so they can all ride together.
People say that life is short, there are some redwood trees more than 1500 years old.
People say that life is short, but there are some redwood trees more than 1500 years old.
My friend Larry, who has a good voice and a place in the chorus.
My friend Larry, who has a good voice and a place in the chorus, is singing now.
I'd like to thank my parents, Tiffany and Greg..
I'd like to thank my parents, Tiffany, and Greg.