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100
An injury like this can change someone’s life in the blink of an eye.
This without a subject
100
It was a weekend getting poked and examined like an animal at the county fair.
Was.
100
Excelling in academics is a top priority right now.
Is.
100
All of his thoughts are human like because of the implant in his head for research.
are.
100
If a story doesn't have a concept of evil, it fails.
contraction - doesn't.
200
In “Evil Robot Monkey”, although Sly seems evil to the majority of the supporting characters, it is really just his lack of self-identity which creates an inner battle between his raw animal instinct and his humanlike qualities .
it is.
200
The other chimps do not mind the children staring at them like they are on display, but Sly is not like the other chimps!
are, is.
200
The challenge that arose is that this newly enhanced chimp is stuck in between being a chimp and a human.
is, is.
200
This is extremely hard for Sly to comprehend because Vern is his first real friend.
this is, is.
200
"Evil Robot Monkey’s" protagonist Sly could be the villain of the story, because although he is portrayed as a victim, he shows nothing but aggression and apathy towards the other characters.
be, is.
300
If an individual cannot control their actions when they don’t get what they want, than they are unfit for a civilized human society.
don't (contraction), than (should be "then"), they are.
300
Even though Sly is locked up all by himself, he is not truly alone because he has a mutual friend in Vern .
is, is.
300
Villains have a history of revealing their true motives. Sly will reveal his motives after he has received enough treatment from Delilah or Vern. He is a train slowly building a deadly amount of momentum. In time that same momentum will carry Sly off the tracks and hurl him into disaster .
Sentence rut, is.
300
What is wrong with the following as the title of a paper: "Analyzing 'Evil Robot Monkey'"?
Boring, bad first impression.
300
In the story Evil Robot Monkey , there is a character different than you and me .
there is, first person (you, me).
400
You cannot blame this happening on anyone it is just one of those things that comes along and changes you for a lifetime.
You (first person), it is, you, run on sentence.
400
Vern is also the one person who can come extremely close to Sly without Sly attacking him. Sly trusts Vern otherwise Sly would not let him get as close as he does.
Sentence rut, is.
400
He knows that he is still a chimp but the humans think that he is more of a human then a chimp and that’s why they isolated him from everyone else.
is, is, contraction and to be verb (that's).
400
Every action should have a consequence whether it be bad or good, that’s just how the cookie crumbles.
be, that's (contraction, to be).
400
Sly doesn’t think he's like other chimps and I can agree with that, he's not like other chimps.
doesn't (contraction), he's (contraction and to be), I (first person), he's (contraction and to be).
500
DAILY DOUBLE! This story is very short but interesting. A chip is placed inside of a chimp that goes by the name of Sly. The chip allows Sly to converse with humans so he is separated from the rest of the chimps and in closed in a pen by himself along with a pottery wheel. Sly enjoys making pottery because it keeps him calm.
Sentence rut, is, is, repetition (chip), is.
500
However, some things will be out of your hands; you will not be able change it no matter how hard you try.
be, your (first person), you, be, you.
500
Sly is both good and bad. He showed that he was bad when he got upset and threw his clay at that window when the kids made him mad. He showed he was good , because at anytime he actually could have broke Vern's neck if he wanted to.
Sentence rut, is, was, was, broke (should be "broken").
500
This can be proven in a story about a chimp named Sly who lives in a zoo like research facility now sly is not an ordinary chip but one that possesses the same amount of Intelligence as most humans he spends his time in his cell making pottery alone because of his intellect he can not reside with other chimps but he can also not reside with humans because he is still an animal and most people view him as such .
Run on, this without subject, capitalization (sly), capitalization (Intelligence).
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They do not understand his state and treat him as if he were just a pet. They punish him for his anger not trying to understand why he is frustrated. Sly has a right to be frustrated. He is stuck in a place where no one can really relate to him because he remains one of a kind.
Sentence rut, be, is.