Dangling Mods
After discussing food deserts, solutions to improve access to food were considered.
One way: After discussing food deserts, we considered solutions to to improve access to food.
Food systems impact the environment they also influence public health.
One way: Food systems impact the environment, and they also influence public health.
The affect of food systems on health is significant.
effect - noun (think: special effects)
affect - verb (does an Action)
Advertisers use colors, sounds, and make promises.
Advertisers use colors, sounds, and promises.
Food deserts are common and created inequality in health outcomes.
create
Using artificial ingredients, food products can taste unnatural.
One way: When manufacturers use artificial ingredients, food products can taste unnatural.
Agriculture relies on water it affects water availability.
One way: Agriculture relies on water, which affects water availability.
Many people share they're favorite recipes.
their
Users like posting recipes, sharing tips, and to review restaurants.
Users like posting recipes, sharing tips, reviewing restaurants.
Ads promote convenience, which attracted many buyers.
attracts
Scrolling through endless recipes, time can be wasted quickly.
One way: When users scroll through endless recipes, time can be wasted quickly.
Social media influences food trends it can also spread misinformation.
One way: Social media influences food trends, but it can also spread misinformation.
The principle cause of unhealthy eating is high sugar intake.
principal
Unhealthy eating leads to weight gain, fatigue, and feeling sluggish.
sluggishness
Consumers check labels because they want to know what was in their food.
Consumers check labels because they want to know what is in their food.
Consumed frequently, health problems may develop.
One way: When fast food is consumed frequently, people may develop health problems.
Eating too much sugar is unhealthy it can lead to obesity.
One way: Eating too much sugar is unhealthy; it can lead to obesity.
Fast food can lead to weight gain over it’s consumption.
its
Fast food is cheap, fast, and it tastes good.
tasty
She was eating lunch when the phone rings.
rang
Analyzing data from food apps, eating habits were revealed.
On way: Analyzing data from food apps, researchers revealed eating habits.
Ads often target youth they have a huge impact on eating habits.
One way: Ads often target youth, which has a huge impact on eating habits.
Apps help consumers choose healthier options effecting their diet.
affecting
Technology in food production improves efficiency, reduces waste, and maintaining quality.
maintains
They start their homework and finished it quickly.
They start their homework and finish it quickly.