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FINISH YOUR WORDS!
SENTENCE BOUNDARIES
WORD CHOICE AND PUNCTUATION
MISCELLANEOUS
ESSAY STRUCTURE
100
Also, she stay after school to help us and my math teacher never stay to help us.
Also, she stayed after school to help us and my math teacher never stayed to help us.
100
I met four math teachers that impacted my education all in different ways. Each with different aspects of teaching. (Fix the fragment)
I met four math teachers that impacted my education all in different ways, each with different aspects of teaching.
100
Some where different others the same. (Fix the word usage and insert a missing comma.)
Some were different, others the same.
100
This is the date and time of the exit essay
November 30, 2015- 8:00 a.m.
100
What are the three types of paragraphs you need to write in this essay? How many total paragraphs do you need to write?
Introduction, body, and conclusion 5
200
I look forward to these classes because they were really interesting to me.
I looked forward to these classes because they were really interesting to me.
200
Ms. Rendak, a kind teacher that would help out with my homework and actually motivate me to follow my dreams.
Ms. Rendak is/was a kind teacher that would help out with my homework and actually motivate me to follow my dreams.
200
Is a blessing to have both of my parents because they're amazing people who have grown so much.
My uncles Raul and Alejandro were born and raised in the same house.
200
True or false: I must path the exit essay in order to pass the course.
False.
200
This is the most important sentence in the entire essay because it gives away the main idea of what the paper is about. It should be located as the final sentence of the introduction.
Thesis statement.
300
He has work very hard to try and pass this class.
He has worked very hard to try and pass this class.
300
Managed time perfectly and kept students entertained.
He managed time perfectly and kept students entertained. Fragment because of a missing subject.
300
When you really get into class and start paying attention is when you realize most of the teachers are not the same.
When I really get into class and start paying attention is when I realize most of the teachers are not the same. (Eliminate use of the second person.)
300
These are three bullet points that have been written on every in-class essay prompt.
*Blue or black ink *Skip lines *Write only on the front side of the paper.
300
This should be the first sentence of all my body paragraphs.
Topic sentence.
400
However, that help a lot because they were still working hard for me to have a better education since they were not able to have one.
However, that helped a lot because they were still working hard for me to have a better education since they were not able to have one.
400
Might of been why he taught the class differently than my other English teacher. (sentence boundaries and word usage issue)
This might have been why he taught the class differently than my other English teacher.
400
Ms. Waltos would at times give a huge amount of homework were it would put students in a not so pleasant mood. (Word usage and missing comma)
Ms. Waltos would at times give a huge amount of homework were it would put students in a not so pleasant mood. (Word usage and missing comma)
400
You need two of these (think a number) from two other members of the English department in order to pass the exit essay.
5s
400
What is the minimum number of sentences for an in-class essay?
5
500
Another way in which my math and reading teacher are different is in giving us motivation.
Another way in which my math and reading teachers are different is in giving us motivation.
500
I wanted pepperoni and mushrooms on it. Whereas she wanted sausage only. (fragment)
I wanted pepperoni and mushrooms on it, whereas she wanted sausage only.
500
For instance, their was a day when she gave her students a six page essay that needed to be completed. (Incorrect word usage)
For instance, there was a day when she gave her students a six page essay that needed to be completed.
500
How will you know your score on the exit essay and grade for the class?
Conferences will be held during the final week of class.
500
Give me the three other elements of a body paragraph besides the (*blank*) Must answer the 300 point question first.
Topic sentence Supporting details Example Connect the example back to the topic sentence/analysis