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How Not To Do It
Bad Habits
Don't Do This
This Either
Avoid At All Costs!
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Mary Robinette Kowal’s short story, Evil Robot Monkey, is about a chimp named Sly who has a metal implant in his head to raise intelligence.
To be verb - is
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This short story was very intriguing to hear because of the main character, Sly, a chimp with an enhanced brain who lives in a zoo.
To be verb - was
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This story seemed like it took place in either a zoo or a laboratory of some type where people can come and look at this robot, named sly, for their own eyes and see him in his own world.
Capitalization - Sly
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Fitting in can be difficult and cause long term discomfort and stress.
To be verb - be
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It is wrong to give an animal the intelligence of a human and still treat him like an unintelligent animal.
“It is” - it is
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If the core message proves elusive, then please do not be discouraged as it will be explained.
To be verbs - be, be
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He isn't normal.
To be verb and contraction - isn’t = is not
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DAILY DOUBLE! Seem like that was the only thing to keep him calm and relaxed.
Fragment, to be verb - was
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Artificial intelligence may seem to be aiding society, however, it is causing long term detriment.
To be verb - be, “It is” - it is
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Evil Robot Monkey is a short story about a chimp who has been implanted with a chip which increases his intelligence.
To be verbs - is, been
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The story is told in third person point of view focusing mostly on Sly and what he’s thinking.
To be verb - is, contraction and to be verb - he’s = he is
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Though it not completely advanced, the chip gives Sly the ability to communicate with humans, show emotion, and even do physical activities.
Fragment
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Short stories are brief, literature writings that can be used as a part of a novel, as a moral lesson.
To be - are, be
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As a college student who has been assigned countless tasks that require intensive reading I have asked myself this question many of times.
First person - I, myself, to be verb - been
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Not only are these children rude, they are disrupting the peace and are loud and will not stop yelling.
To be verbs - are, are, are, Run on sentence, missing comma between loud and and and between peace and and
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The story is believed to take place in a zoo due to his imprisonment within glass walls and metal bars, also the fact that children, being accompanied by a teacher, have come to visit him.
To be verbs - is, Run on sentence
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In the Evil Robot Monkey the author shows that Sly the monkey is too smart to be with other monkeys but not sophisticated enough to be with humans.
To be verbs - is, be, be, missing commas - between Monkey and the, monkeys and be, repetition - monkey
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In conclusion, the moral of the story is that no one is born perfect in life and one should not be afraid to have been born different than others.
To be verbs - is, is, be, been
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I think this compares itself to the human race and how, yeah people do go crazy but there are things that can make us go nuts sometimes.
First person - I, this without a subject - this compares, “it is” - there are
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In the end Sly makes the school teacher a vase and in my opinion learns that sometimes it’s okay to be mad and sometimes we don't like everyone, but we’d have to get through it.
Missing comma between vase and and, First person - my, we, we’d, Contraction and to be verb - it’s = it is, to be verb - be, contractions - don’t = do not, we’d = we would
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The short story Evil Robot Monkey by Mary Robinette Kowal shows us what the life of a chimp might be; if it had a computer chip implanted in its head, thereby making it more intelligent.
To be verbs - be, Repetition - it, its, it
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This is a third person narrative about a chimp named Sly, he has a chip in his head that has furthered his brain development.
“It is” - this is, this without a subject
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She’s viewed as not being understanding and is said in the story that she needs to start thinking, making her seem like a bad person in Sly’s point of view.
To be verb and contraction - She’s = She is, to be verb - is
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As there are children approaching other cages looking at the monkeys the children aren’t as entertained looking at them as when they meander to Slys' cage they notice that he's not just sitting there, he's actually working.
Run on sentence, to be verbs and contractsion - aren’t = are not, he’s = he is, he’s = he is, Repetition - they, they, children, children, missing comma - between monkeys and the children
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Throughout the story there was one person who seem to understand the robot a little bit better than most people on the story, but also wasn’t going to take his attitude or be afraid to be strict with it when needed.
“It is” - there was, contraction and to be verb - wasn’t = was not, to be verb - be, be