Revising
Editing
Fiction
Poetry
Essay
100

What 4 ways can you revise sentences or words?

ARMS

Add

Remove

Move

Substitute

100

What 4 things can you do in editing to improve your essay?

CUPS

Capitalization

Usages (nouns/verbs)

Punctuation

Spelling

100

What are some key differences between fiction and nonfiction passages?

Fiction will develop characters, follow a plot (or part of) and other elements of literature

Nonfiction includes facts, information, and possibly data, charts, and graphs.

100

What does SITS stand for when analyzing poetry? (You might know this as SUITS, or SIFTS - That's OK too!)

Summary

Imagery

Tone

Shift

100

What 5 things do you need for ALL essays?

Introduction

Thesis

Evidence

Reasoning/Explain

Conclusion

200

A sentence repeats information in the last paragraph. Which sentence (32, 33, 34, or 35) should she delete?

Sentence 33 

It already says he surprised her in sentence 32 which includes additional information. 33 is not needed.

200

(2) It gave light to a 3,000-foot-diameter space, stood 165 feet tall, had a base of 15 feet, and weighed approximatly 5,000 pounds.

D: Change approximatly to approximately

200

The attitude/feelings the writer has about a specific topic is...

Tone

200

Which figurative language uses "like" or "as?"

Simile

200

List 2 things you need to do in an argumentative essay you DO NOT NEED for informational.

Pick ONE side of the argument

Counterargument

300

(27) Moving through room after room slowly, paintings hung neatly on white walls.

B is correct

Correctly and effectively combines the two ideas of moving through the rooms slowly and paintings hung neatly on white walls.

300

Fix the sentence below:

Tuesday I am taking the English II EOC I know I will do great.

Tuesday I am taking the English II EOC, and I know I will do great.

300

What is the moral or message of a passage?

Theme

300

What is the term used to describe writing that appeals to one of the five senses?

Imagery

300

What is correspondence and what does it need?

Write a letter - greeting and closing

400

(17) During the trip, Thomas had to deal with jellyfish stings, mouth and throat pains, and keeping food down. (18) She wanted to give up at one point, but they encouraged her to keep going. (19) The most difficult challenge was still to come, however; it was a surprising shift in the weather. 

C: change they to crew members

400

(10) They have inspired a documentary, The Last of the Moonlight Towers that pays homage to this part of Austin's history.

B: Insert a comma after Towers

Appositive phrase
400

What are the paired passage questions asking you to find?

Similarities or differences

400

What is the term used to describe when something is both what it is and represents something more?

Symbolism

400

How do you write a thesis statement?

Use the prompt to write your CLAIM then add reasons:

CLAIM because reason 1 and reason 1.

500

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9? 

(8) Early attempts to provide provisions to troops left them weakened. (9) Troops were also left malnourished and susceptible to disease, which could be fatal.

Early attempts to provide provisions to troops left them weakened, malnourished, and susceptible to disease, which could be fatal.

500

(4) The moon towers, which is what people now call the structures, is no longer a practical source of light.

C: Change is to are

"Towers" means more than 1: "is" = singular, "are" = multiple

Towers are... 

The tower is...

500

D is correct.

The narrator feels sadness and empathy for the soldier (single, lonely, faded) and feels responsible since the soldier has no one and nothing else.

500

What is a change in setting, speaker, time, or tone called?

Shift

500

List 4 RAVs to improve words like "says" or "shows" in writing.

Examples include:

illustrates, conveys, emphasizes, suggests, implies, acknowledges, claims, clarifies, argues, portrays, demonstrates... and on and on.