What 4 ways can you revise sentences or words?
ARMS
Add
Remove
Move
Substitute
What 4 things can you do in editing to improve your essay?
CUPS
Capitalization
Usages (nouns/verbs)
Punctuation
Spelling
What are some key differences between fiction and nonfiction passages?
Fiction will develop characters, follow a plot (or part of) and other elements of literature
Nonfiction includes facts, information, and possibly data, charts, and graphs.
What does SITS stand for when analyzing poetry? (You might know this as SUITS, or SIFTS - That's OK too!)
Summary
Imagery
Tone
Shift
What 5 things do you need for ALL essays?
Introduction
Thesis
Evidence
Reasoning/Explain
Conclusion
A sentence repeats information in the last paragraph. Which sentence (32, 33, 34, or 35) should she delete?
Sentence 33
It already says he surprised her in sentence 32 which includes additional information. 33 is not needed.
(2) It gave light to a 3,000-foot-diameter space, stood 165 feet tall, had a base of 15 feet, and weighed approximatly 5,000 pounds.
D: Change approximatly to approximately
The attitude/feelings the writer has about a specific topic is...
Tone
Which figurative language uses "like" or "as?"
Simile
List 2 things you need to do in an argumentative essay you DO NOT NEED for informational.
Pick ONE side of the argument
Counterargument
(27) Moving through room after room slowly, paintings hung neatly on white walls.
B is correct
Correctly and effectively combines the two ideas of moving through the rooms slowly and paintings hung neatly on white walls.
Fix the sentence below:
Tuesday I am taking the English II EOC I know I will do great.
Tuesday I am taking the English II EOC, and I know I will do great.
What is the moral or message of a passage?
Theme
What is the term used to describe writing that appeals to one of the five senses?
Imagery
What is correspondence and what does it need?
Write a letter - greeting and closing
(17) During the trip, Thomas had to deal with jellyfish stings, mouth and throat pains, and keeping food down. (18) She wanted to give up at one point, but they encouraged her to keep going. (19) The most difficult challenge was still to come, however; it was a surprising shift in the weather.
C: change they to crew members
(10) They have inspired a documentary, The Last of the Moonlight Towers that pays homage to this part of Austin's history.
B: Insert a comma after Towers
Appositive phraseWhat are the paired passage questions asking you to find?
Similarities or differences
What is the term used to describe when something is both what it is and represents something more?
Symbolism
How do you write a thesis statement?
Use the prompt to write your CLAIM then add reasons:
CLAIM because reason 1 and reason 1.
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9?
(8) Early attempts to provide provisions to troops left them weakened. (9) Troops were also left malnourished and susceptible to disease, which could be fatal.
Early attempts to provide provisions to troops left them weakened, malnourished, and susceptible to disease, which could be fatal.
(4) The moon towers, which is what people now call the structures, is no longer a practical source of light.
C: Change is to are
"Towers" means more than 1: "is" = singular, "are" = multiple
Towers are...
The tower is...
D is correct.
The narrator feels sadness and empathy for the soldier (single, lonely, faded) and feels responsible since the soldier has no one and nothing else.
What is a change in setting, speaker, time, or tone called?
Shift
List 4 RAVs to improve words like "says" or "shows" in writing.
Examples include:
illustrates, conveys, emphasizes, suggests, implies, acknowledges, claims, clarifies, argues, portrays, demonstrates... and on and on.