Correct this sentence as if it belonged in an argumentative essay:
In my opinion, bullying is dumb cuz it hurts alot of people and makes them mad and people feel bad when their bullyed.
Bullying is a problem, because it hurts a lot of people. It makes them mad, and people feel upset when they're bullied.
Purpose
Audience
Topic
Fix this sentence as if it were occurring in an informative essay:
The story says that physical bullying (hitting, punching), verbal bullying (calling names, gossip) are a problem. I know this because that's what the story says.
According to the text in Source 1, "physical bullying (hitting, punching), [and] verbal bullying (calling names, gossip)" are a problem in. This shows that bullying is wrong, because it hurts people.
Every time you get a writing prompt, use PAT to understand the prompt before anything else.
Introduction
Body 1
Body 2
Conclusion
Introduction
Body 1
Body 2
Counterargument/Rebuttal
Conclusion
Fix this sentence, as if it occurred in an argumentative essay.
In conclusion, the other side is wrong because my opinion is better.
How should your information be ordered in your body paragraphs? (Hint: remember to start with a transition.)
DOUBLE JEOPARDY:
Fix this sentence as if it occurred in an informative essay.
But thats not all its also bad for familys who wach their kids suffer from bullying.
That's not all, though. It's also bad for families who watch their kids suffer from bullying.
Bullying and how to stop it
The importance of art and music in school
Is reality TV beneficial for society?
Does class size impact education?
I: 4
A: 5