Panchito's family was very poor they were migrant workers.
Panchito's family was very poor. They were migrant workers.
100
Another barrier he had to faced was language.
Another barrier hew had to face was language.
100
Gandhi refused copy another student's correct spelling.
Gandhi refused to copy another student's correct spelling.
200
No, Queen Victoria was never visit India.
No, Queen Victoria never visited India.
200
Gandhi's friend told him if you eat your meat your health will be strong.
Gandhi's friend told him if he ate his meat his health would be strong.
200
Gandhi felt bad because his mother was died.
Gandhi felt bad because his mother died.
or
Gandhi felt bad because his mother was dead.
200
We didn't have school for the hurricane.
We didn't have school because of the hurricane.
200
Queen Victoria was the longest monarch in British history.
Queen Victoria was the longest reigning monarch in British history.
Queen Victoria had the longest reign in British history.
Queen Victoria was queen for the longest time in British history.
300
Babur was a Muslim monarch became the founder of the Mogul Dynasty.
Babur was a Muslim monarch who became the founder of the Mogul Dynasty.
300
Bill Clinton had to stop to eat meat and junk food.
Bill Clinton had to stop eating meat and junk food.
300
Gandhi was a vegetarian for his religion.
Gandhi was a vegetarian because of his religion.
300
Gandhi went to England for become a lawyer.
Gandhi went to England in order to become a lawyer.
or
Gandhi went to England to become a lawyer.
300
Gandhi studied South African reality for be able to better defend Indians in South Africa.
Gandhi studied South african reality (in order) to be better able to defend Indians in South Africa.
400
We do not have free time for cooked healthy food at home.
We do not have free time to cook healthy food at home.
or
We do not have free time for cooking healthy food at home.
400
Her parents changed their diet in order they eat the same meal all together.
Her parents changed their diet so they eat the same meal all together.
400
In the article "Bill Clinton's Vegan Diet," the writer told us Bill Clinton changed his diet become vegan.
In the article "Bill Clinton's Vegan Diet," the writer told us Bill Clinton changed his diet and became vegan.
400
Many people in the US that have heart disease that emerges from how they eat.
Many people in the US have heart disease that emerges from how they eat.
400
In order to keep healthy, I eat well, it is good for exercise, and get lots of rest.
In order to keep healthy, I eat well, exercise, and get lots of rest.
500
We can see more people eating junk food such as hot dogs, hamburgers, pizza from food franchises like McDonalds, Pizza Hut.
We can see more people eating junk food such as hot dogs, hamburgers, and pizza from food franchises like McDonalds and Pizza Hut.
500
Although vegan can help us avoid sickness, I think our meat eating habits is good for health, people should never change our meat eating habits.
Although veganism can help us avoid sickness, I think our meat eating habits are good for health, people should never change our meat eating habits.
3 MISTAKES, 1 PUNCTUATION
500
The doctors say that the human body needs those nutrients to have better health if you don't have a proper nourishment you can become malnourished.
2 mistakes, 1 PUNCTUATION
The doctors say that the human body needs those nutrients to have better health if you don't have proper nourishment you can become malnourished.
500
In the world many people have health problem and it is disease become from many different kinds of food.
In the word many people have health problems, and disease comes from many different kinds of food.
3 ERRORS.
500
People think that in the meat, chicken, eggs have lot of vitamins, minerals, calcium's and proteins.
5 ERRORS
People think that in meat, chicken and eggs there are a lot of vitamins, minerals, calcium and protein.